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Spartan-759

aka Raven

  • I live in Tasmania
  • I was born on September 11
  • I am male
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Hyper Zergling
Halo - Finale and One Final Effort

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
I am not sure what you are talking about. Can you please explain?



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TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
If you mean you want me to play Halo with you, I won't be able to until 2 and a half weeks after today.



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TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
My user page?



Re:hello

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SonasaurusBorn as equals. Raised as warriors. Die as heroes
Spartan laser

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 21:06, March 18, 2012 (EST)
Err...I'm not sure what you're asking me. Are you roleplaying as a fictional character?

Help

Do you need assistance? I don't believe Athena32 is up and about at the moment; not sure about CarpeJugulum or Flame-124, though. At any rate, what do you need help with? Auguststorm1945 03:49, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps you could be more specific? Do you mean infoboxes? Auguststorm1945 03:55, March 19, 2012 (UTC)
Use this template. Copy paste the following to your article and fill-in as needed:
{{SPARTAN Infobox
|name=
|realname=
|image=
|caption=
|spartantag=
|homeworld=
|birth=
|death=
|gender=
|height=
|hair=
|eyes=
|cyber=
|affiliation=
|rank=
|specialty=
|battles=
|status=
|class=
}}
Does that help? Auguststorm1945 04:04, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, what about? Flame-124 06:36, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Well, just tell a story. You can break it up using headlines and whatnot, specifying particular periods of their life, but get in that storyteller mood. I can't tell you what to say, but think about the life they had growing up, before and after getting accepted into the Spartan program. Then think about their accomplishments as a Spartan. Let your creativity flow. Flame-124 06:40, March 21, 2012 (UTC)


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Athena32"A million stars between here and home, A million enemies: more. Yet here he stands: ever vigilant, And here he'll stay: A lone warrior, on a desolate plain."
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Hi Spartan-759. I see you've messaged a number of users, including myself, asking if you can speak to them. The answer is yes, you can talk to us, by leaving messages on our talk pages. In asking permission to speak to people, you are in fact already speaking to them.


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SonasaurusWe are not to be judged by those who precede us
Spartan laser

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 20:14, March 21, 2012 (EST)
Please remember to always sign your comments with ~~~~ at the end.


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Athena32"Sir. Finishing this fight."
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No need to apologise; there's no harm done and I know it takes a while to get used to different websites when you're new. As for RPs, there's currently one getting underway, RP:The_Battle_Of_Draco_III; if you're interested in possibly joining, talk to Captain Foster who is the creator. Because you're new, it may be difficult for you to be included in an RP right away; I would suggest maybe you write some character articles first and develop them, then when an RP comes along you can join using them.



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SonasaurusWithin its barren layers, something has been held for aeons
Spartan laser

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 20:18, March 21, 2012 (EST)
That's alright, you'll get into the habit of it in time. Another good habit to remember is to always enter a new header in a message unless you're continuing a previous conversation. To do this, always click "Leave message" at the top of the user talk page instead of clicking "edit" at the bottom-most section


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Athena32"Chase us all the way to hell, you bastards."
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Yes, I've noticed. User pages aren't generally used for presenting fanon information, and if you want to do that properly you should create an article, as user pages are supposed to be for displaying other information. Be advised though, once an article is on mainspace, you'll need to ensure it remains loyal to the established canon of the Halo universe (you'll also need to do this if you want to use a character in RPs and stuff). It's certainly not pathetic, in fact it's a great effort for a new user, but it does need some help, which the community can provide.


Article

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SonasaurusTrust is to know. Faith is to believe
Spartan laser

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 21:06, March 21, 2012 (EST)
I've moved your article from your userpage to Spartan-759. Athena32 was asking you to move it there, but I've done it for you. Please note that your article breaks several Halo Fanon rules which will be brought up on its talk page, you will have to address them and fix said issues or they'll be moved to a subpage of your userpage.

As an additional note, please do not remove talk page comments, as they are needed to be kept under record for proper reference.


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SonasaurusBorn as equals. Raised as warriors. Die as heroes
Spartan laser

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 21:15, March 21, 2012 (EST)
You just removed the comment that told you what the problem was, and then you ask me what the problem was...

Help

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LoyalHaloFan — I know nothing
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, August 8 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)
Hey i've noticed your page and if your confused on how to make a SPARTAN you can always refer here: http://www.halopedian.com/SPARTAN_Program

Trust me, Halopedian can really help people if they are unsure or just wanna make sure whatever they're making is canon friendly. Hackett Out.



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Halo - Finale and One Final Effort

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
Hey, Athena32 picked out more problems, and they're all on the talk page, if you don't know that already. You should definitely fix them.



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TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
I really think you should see the whole list of problems as a check list. You've only fixed some of the problems.



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MaslabThe Navy. The Tech. The Mobility.
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, August 8 2020 (Pacific Standard Time)
What do you need?



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Hyper Zergling
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TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
The suggestions are all in the talk page of the article.



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Athena32"Someday we will win, no matter what it takes."
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Sure. I see you've already made some improvements, which is good. The first and main thing I would do is point you towards Halopedia. This is the best resource for Halo canon around, and it's where we go to check things and get information. You'll find it really useful to read and gain some background knowledge for your own fanon, which will make your own work more accurate, realistic and interesting.

Also, I know you don't really want to remove stuff from the article, but it's really the simplest and easiest option; many of the problems can't really be fixed so I'd suggest removing them and replacing them with newly created content, which is canon friendly because you've referenced Halopedia during writing :).

"okay but i can't think of anything to replace it and make like a proper spartan character from the series like you guy's can"

Honestly, don't worry about that. The priority is to get the article canon friendly; after that you can devote time to crafting a long and interesting SPARTAN character like the others I guess you've seen here. You gotta walk before you can run!



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TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
I think this is all you need left to do to fix the article:
  • What confuses me is that you have his tag as 279 for the article title, but it says A279 in the infobox. Pick one. 279 would make him a Class II SPARTAN-II, and A279 would make him an Alpha Company SPARTAN-III.
    • His tag also would affect his birthdate. As a Class II SPARTAN-II, he should be born in 2531. As an Alpha Company SPARTAN-III, his should be born around 2523-2525.
    • This would also affect how he was conscripted into the military. As a Class II SPARTAN-II, he would have been kidnapped at the age of six. As an Alpha Company SPARTAN-III, he would have been orphaned from a Covenant attack and then taken into the military.
    • If he is a SPARTAN-II, he should be taller, almost seven feet, unless you want to make him small.
    • Under the section "Class" in the infobox, it should have either Class II: 2545, or SPARTAN-III Alpha Company.
  • In the section of the Fall of Reach, he could not have been a sergeant, as that is not a rank in the Navy. Also, if he's a SPARTAN-II, he would have already been a Petty Officer Second Class, which is the same rank as Sergeant. If he was promoted, it would have to be to a higher rank than Petty Officer Second Class. Of course, just look up the ranks on Halopedia.
  • Put the Battle of Harvest before the Fall of Reach. It was the first battle of the Human-Covenant War.
  • In the section of Harvest, it says that a ship was destroyed by a C-4. C-4 is outdated at this point. But, the UNSC uses C-12, which is very similar. So change C-4 to C-12.
  • This isn't a canon problem, but fix your spelling and grammar. As of how it is, the article is quite painful to read.

That is all the problems left that I see. Fix those, and the article should be fine.



Re: Roleplay

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TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
If you have any questions, just ask. I may have said something in a confusing way.



Re:Help

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SonasaurusHonour above all else
Spartan laser

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 18:39, March 22, 2012 (EST)
Since Athena32 is currently slamming his forehead repeatedly into the nearest concrete wall, I'll answer this one for him.

Use software with spell-checker. The easiest one that comes to mind is Microsoft Word. Also, it would be advisable if you learned from someone how to use proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation if you like writing fanfiction.


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SonasaurusHonour above all else
Spartan laser

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 18:52, March 22, 2012 (EST)
That's going to be a bit trickier. I don't like to ask for personal info, but how old are you?


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TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
I just looked through your corrections, and you created new problems. Assuming you do not change when he was born:
  • There is no SPARTAN-II Delta Comapny. There was going to be a SPARTAN-III Delta Company, but that never happened by the end of the Human-Covenant War.
  • If he is a Class-II SPARTAN-II, his tag should be no greater than 300, there there should be no letter.
  • He can be a SPARTAN-III, but with a birth year of 2531, he would have to be part of the Beta Company, which would have B in front of the tag. Like I said about SPARTAN-IIIs, they were not kidnapped, but were taken into custody when their parents were killed by the Covenant. Also, if you make him a SPARTAN-III, well, 7'5" might be too tall.
  • Remove "special operations" from the Class section.
  • One thing I didn't point out earlier is that ONI Section 3 is in charge of the SPARTAN programs.



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Anonymous ONI agent - Gwneud o dân, a gyda chalonnau wneud o iâ.
"From this moment onward, you are Egon Talorus. And to humanity, you are everything.":

TALK - 16:28, March 24, 2012 (UTC)
Of course you can. What's up?




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TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
I think there are no more canon issues. At this point, it's a matter of spelling and grammar. Since I am not allowed to remove the NCF template, you're going to have to ask an administrator like Ajax 013 or Sonasaurus.



My suggestions

Hey dude, sorry it took me so long. Anyway, if you want to get that NCF tag removed from your page, I suggest you do several things. One thing is that SPARTAN-IIs were recruited at age six; ten is too old, so he would have been rejected simply because of his age if he were ten, so have him get recruited when he was six. The SPARTAN-IIs were also augmented at age 14 or 15, not 18. Another thing is that marines didn't recruit SPARTANs, so instead of having marines recruit him, havee ONI personnel kidnap him and replace him with a flash clone. Also, the UNSC didn't "need every able-body" for the SPARTAN Programs, especially not the SPARTAN-II Program, which was extremely picky about its candidates. If a child did not meet every single requirement absolutely perfectly, they couldn't become a SPARTAN. This is partly because only the kids with the strongest bodies and the most willpower could have a chance of surviving the augmentation process. Therefore, make it so that your SPARTAN was perfect SPARTAN material.

Additionally, the Human-Covenant War began when the Covenant attacked Harvest in November 2525, roughly six years before your SPARTAN was born. You could potentially change his birthdate to 2511 and have him be a Class I SPARTAN-II, but you would have to change his SPARTAN tag and make it below 150.

I'll continue with this tomorrow, I'm having a hard time staying awake right now lol.

»Beware, The Demons Bring Automatic Weapons« Begin the First Movement: All that you know shall die with you. 04:41, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, your article is looking a lot better now, but there's still work to be done. The first thing you should do is change the name of the article to Shade-129. Do this, and then we'll start on the final steps of fixing your article. »Beware, The Demons Bring Automatic Weapons« Begin the First Movement: All that you know shall die with you. 16:23, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Excellent. Now we can finish fixing your article. I will list off all of the remaining issues here and give ways to fix them.

  • SPARTAN-IIs can't hold ranks above Lieutenant Commander. Make him a lower rank, preferably enlisted. I would suggest the rank of Chief Petty Officer.
  • He couldn't have been fighting Jackals before the Human-Covenant War. Humans had never seen intelligent alien races before the Covenant attacked Harvest in 2525. Replace Jackals with some sort of dangerous animal, or better yet, change his homeworld to Reach and have it be a Guéta (one of those friggin' huge creatures that you see in the level Nightfall in Halo: Reach).
  • "Hacking" is not a specialty. Specialties include rifleman (a basic soldier), automatic rifleman (a machinegunner), grenadier (someone who specializes in using explosive weapons, though not heavy weapons that also happen to be explosive, such as rocket launchers or RPGs), fireteam leader (a squad leader), marksman (someone who specializes in using precision firearms like the DMR, but usually not higher caljber longer range weapons like sniper rifles), sniper (you probably know about this one, lol), heavy weapons specialist (someone who specializes in using heavy weapons like the rocket launcher or Spartan laser), or CQC (Close Quarters Combat, which involves fighting enemies at close range), just to name a few.

I will update this list later today.

»Beware, The Demons Bring Automatic Weapons« Begin the First Movement: All that you know shall die with you. 20:48, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Grammar

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SonasaurusWe are not to be judged by those who precede us
Spartan laser

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 18:04, March 28, 2012 (EST)
I'm sorry, but I'm afraid I can't help you point out every spelling and grammar error you make. You can, however, use Microsoft Word or something to fix most of the mistakes, and once you update your article, I can pick out the ones that are left.

Okay, two more things. First, "Enlightened Amendment" is more likely to be the name of a Covenant Ship than a UNSC ship. UNSC vessels have names like UNSC Saigon or UNSC Ia Drang. Now, you can't use those specific names since I've already used them in my work, but you use something like UNSC Otto von Bismark (named after the famous Prussian military leader who united the Germanic states leftover from the dissolution of the Holy Roman Empire) UNSC Ibelin (named after Balien of Ibelin, a Christian military leader who fought in the Second Great Crusade). Next is that you should make his first name Shade, since SPARTANs went by their first names, and were not allowed to know their last names. Once you've done that, I will edit your article and correct the spelling, grammar, and formatting errors (essentially, I will make it look prettiful :P), then I will contact an admin, have them look the article over to see if the NCF tag can be removed. If they point out any remaining errors, I will help you correct them. »Beware, The Demons Bring Automatic Weapons« Begin the First Movement: All that you know shall die with you. 23:21, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

BTW, know that it will not be possible for me to fix your spelling, grammar, and coding errors in every article you may make in the future, so you will either need to learn how to use proper spelling and grammar and wiki writeup, or use a spelling and grammar checker when you write your articles and learn proper wiki writeup. Not that I won't help you with that stuff if you ask me, but you won't be able to rely on me to fix every single mistake in every article you make, since I have a life and don't have time to do that. But I will fix it for you just this once, since you're new and I don't want to make things too hard or complicated for you. »Beware, The Demons Bring Automatic Weapons« Begin the First Movement: All that you know shall die with you. 23:38, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Don't worry dude. Everyone had a rough time when they started out here. Even me, but I was blessed enough to not have any of my articles NCFed, though I still came close. You're really no different from anyone else here, and soon enough you'll figure things out. The important thing is to ask for help, and you're already doing that. A lot of new users get their articles NCFed, and they just argue with the admins instead of trying to fix it, or they just get fed up and quit. One of my friends did that, and he still regrets it. And there's also users like this, who end up getting banned. Be proud that you aren't one of those people, and just keep at it until you get it right ;)

I'll probably have time to fix your article tomorrow.

»Beware, The Demons Bring Automatic Weapons« Begin the First Movement: All that you know shall die with you. 23:54, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re: hello again.

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Hyper Zergling
Halo - Finale and One Final Effort

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
I don't have my XBox with me right now. I accept your friend request tomorrow night.



RE: Messaging You

In the future, please just state what you need, instead of asking me to message you. Much like asking if you ask a question, it is somewhat annoying. Nevertheless, what do you need to discuss? Auguststorm1945 06:10, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

What specifically do you need help with in regards to Shade-129? Auguststorm1945 (Talk) 06:29, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
I'd recommend asking Athena32; he seems most familiar with your article, and the concerns of the contributor who originally tagged your article (HZ, concerning the tag number) have been dealt with. Auguststorm1945 (Talk) 06:37, April 3, 2012 (UTC)
Just leave him a message asking him to clarify what you need to do to remove the NCF template. I know he isn't on at the moment, but he will message you back when he is next on. Auguststorm1945 (Talk) 06:54, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Request

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Shade Link — Why do I feel like I'm being stalked?
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Hmm? What units?



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Shade Link — I have seen many mesmerizing things, and it is hard to turn away from them. However, there are people out there involved with those things whose ferocity towards you since your debut makes you feel like an interloper. They might attempt to reproach you because of your convictions, making you talk and act sheepishly. This can carry on until it is a raging whirlwind that devastates you, and makes you feel like a fiasco. Corruption spreads quickly, like an epidemic-Those are my actual words, and things that happened to me.
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I don't know anything about that stuff O_o



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Shade Link — Who am I? The question is who are you? I am Shadow Demon Shade Link, and I demand ID, or I will have to gut you.
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What war?



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Shade Link — Yo mama's so fat that when she walks across the TV she takes up all of the Lord of The Rings movies.
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I don't roleplay.



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Shade Link — Just forgive and forget, forgive and forget.
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Only an admin can remove the template.


Re: Help

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Hyper Zergling
Halo - Finale and One Final Effort

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, 8 August 2020
What do you need?



RE: Help

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Athena32"If you can walk, set your boots on the line."
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Apologies for the exceptionally late reply, I have been very distracted the last few weeks, and probably will be at least until my exams are over. I did receive your messages but didn't have the time to answer them adequately.

I will take a look at the article later today and get back to you with any remaining issues.

Regards!



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Brodie-001The Demon - The Fighter - The Fallen - The Survivor
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday 15:45 2020
Sure, no need to ask. What did you need?



Odin2
Brodie-001The Demon - The Fighter - The Fallen - The Survivor
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday 15:45 2020
Okay. I'm assuming that you are referring to Shade-129. I'll see what I can suggest, it's past midnight here and I really need some sleep.

Okay, here's a list of problems and possible solutions to it.

  • The article name: Not a problem as such, but if his real name isn't Shade, I'd recommend that you change it to his real name, and mention his nickname in a short introduction to the character along with codenames, like I have done at the beginning of this Spartan's article. You don't have to do it, but it might make it look better.
  • Details about his life: You are a little vague on what happens to the Spartan, and how the abduction procedure works exactly. I'm guessing that yours is a Reach-trained Spartan under Halsey. Mine were Earth-trained (long story), so I can't really elaborate much on how to go about it. Check out this page on the SPARTAN-II Program to read into the details. I'd recommend reading Halo: Fall of Reach as well if you want to look into how the training was. In regards to his early life, you should look up where he was born on Reach, how his childhood was before he was abducted and so on. You seem to have begun it in the middle of some kind of story. For his later career, you could write more about what team he was in, what battles he could have participated in, how he survived Reach and so on.
  • Detail: While you've listened to the feedback given by other users and changed your article accordingly, try and add detail to what he has done. Not only will this make your article look better, it will allow you to add more to your character's story. Oh, and you seem to have listed his class as 'I-III'. Judging by his birth date, he would be 'Class I, 2525'
  • Lastly, I'll leave you with some links to my articles if you want advice on how to structure it. They're not perfect, but I hope they help you. I'll also leave some links to Halopedia pages that you can research from:

Well, I hope these help you out. Feel free to message me with any more questions and I'll respond tomorrow. If you think all the changes are fixed you should contact an administrator to have them remove the NCF tag from your page. Good luck!


Re:Hello again.

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SonasaurusWe are not to be judged by those who precede us
Spartan laser

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 8:40, April 30, 2012 (EST)
Format wise, it looks fine. Your writing could use a bit of editing, but it's not bad. Just lengthen the article a bit.


Now I know you don't exactly... well, like me, but I CAN help you with your RP. At least, most of it. I can't say I know much about Halo. But the formatting, writing, and pitching I can help with. If you're interested. --GrazerMagic 00:26, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

I rather meant I'd talk with you about what could be improved. I would definitely not want to add or remove stuff that you really deemed valuable.

Netherless, I'mma just touch up some grammar here and there for you. Cheers. --GrazerMagic 15:07, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Joining Titania

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LoyalHaloFan — I know nothing
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, August 8 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)
Sure. Like what?



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LoyalHaloFan — I know nothing
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, August 8 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)
I'm not sure. Could you tell me your strengths on making articles? Like, what are you most comfortable with? People, Ships, Organizations or Wars.
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LoyalHaloFan — I know nothing
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, August 8 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)
Okay, I'll see how you do for now. The policy for the project will soon be made, until then you are currently a non-official member until you make one article for the project. Please stay within the canon, use Halopedia for help. To start you off you can possibly work on William Jayden or the Polyphemus-class Supercarrier. Chose one and work on it, then I'll check on the progress and see if it works well. I will even ask an Admin to make sure it is fully okay. Welcome aboard and I'll see you on the frontlines, soldier.

P.S. This is going to be for everybody who wishes to join the project, so don't worry if I may be insulting you do to your shade article being NCF'd.



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LoyalHaloFan — I know nothing
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, August 8 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)
Well, you can go on Halopedia.com and you can read everything that is canon to the Halo Universe. Or, you could read the numerous books and play the campaigns of the games (Which I highly recommend)



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LoyalHaloFan — I know nothing
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, August 8 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)
I also recommend you go talk to Sonasaurus and get a proper signature. He helped me out a lot when I first joined the site.


Re:Hi

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SonasaurusThey are coming for us...who will stand together?
Spartan laser

TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 20:53, May 2, 2012 (EST)
What do you mean by a proper signature?

Hello you messaged me about help with articals etc, honestly i don't know much myself, im still new around here but most of my ideas i have on my pages are ideas and things i found from other articals, Just use your imagination for coming up with a story. If you need any help with things any of the admins will help you, like they did with me ^_^ --S-077 02:15, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

I will have a look over your page ^_^ --S-077 19:08, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

everything seems to be fine, just listen to what tips others give, but remember be creative and let your imagination flow--S-077 19:15, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Titania

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LoyalHaloFan — I know nothing
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, August 8 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)
Don't worry, your already in it. It's just going under major story changes. Stay tuned! Keelah se'lai


response

Which article did you want to ask about? I've got assignments coming up, but I have a bit of time to give suggestions if you want them. Specops306 Autocrat Qur'a 'Morhek 07:49, May 28, 2012 (UTC)

Well, first of all ODSTs aren't abducted, they're a volunteer special forces unit. Which means that you can enlist in the military when you reach the minimum age, and either train as one or join another branch and be invited from there. If you want him to have been abducted at an early age, then he will have to start out as a SPARTAN-II, who were. If you keep the background of being abducted, then it might help to explain why he was in a forest being attacked by Guta in the first place - was he with his dad, hiking, when they attacked? The father was killed, but the ONI agents saved him.
Alternatively, he could have joined the ODSTs when he was 18, served in a few battles, and then joined the SPARTAN-IV Program, which did take volunteers and augment them. Additionally, your quotes sound a little...cliche'd. I find that quotes should offer a viewpoint, or get across information - all the current ones really tell a reader is that he likes to yell at things.
Also, a Spartan wouldn't be assigned as a second-in-command, or permanently attached to a UNSC Destroyer. They're supersoldiers, not commanders. Covert special operations, not naval commanding.Specops306 Autocrat Qur'a 'Morhek 00:38, May 29, 2012 (UTC)


SmartLinkScope
Ahalosniper — That Damn Sniper, sniping — Forged in secret, tempered in fire; Cheeky Demon, God Defier
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, August 8 2020 (Pacific Standard Time)
I'm not usually looked to for aid, but I'll assist if I can. What is it you require?




SmartLinkScope
Ahalosniper — That Damn Sniper, sniping — Forged in secret, tempered in fire; Cheeky Demon, God Defier
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday, August 8 2020 (Pacific Standard Time)
Just confirming the email got through. Sometimes people link to old accounts they don't check often, myself one of them. Regards, That Damn Sniper.




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Uh, hey.--Only the faithless will perish, but those without cannot be punished. 18:39, June 7, 2012 (UTC)

Canon

I know my stuff fairly well, why?--Only the faithless will perish, but those without cannot be punished. 16:41, June 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re:Article

It depends, can I have some info? And which page?--Only the faithless will perish, but those without cannot be punished. 20:37, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmmmmmmmmmm?

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Re:Hi

StingerJacket
RozhSituation normal, all fucked up.
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS Saturday, August 8 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)
Sorry for the delay, but if you still need assistance with anything, I'm available. :)



StingerJacket
RozhSituation normal, all fucked up.
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS Saturday, August 8 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)
"Canon friendly" means that it fits with official Halo material. All content on Halo Fanon has to be canon friendly on Halo Fanon, as per the rules, in order to maintain a higher quality of fanon.
  • Non-canon friendly example - Someone makes an article about Noble Six (SPARTAN-B312, the main character of Halo: Reach) and they write that he survived the Battle of Reach and went on to fight in the Battle of Earth.
    • Why is it non-canon friendly? It is clear that at the end of the Halo: Reach campaign, Noble Six died in the level "Lone Wolf", so it would be impossible for him to survive to fight in future battles.
    • Suggestions for a canon-friendly alternative - If you were to make an article about SPARTAN-B312, you could focus more on his past before the Battle of Reach, or about another SPARTAN that survived the battle instead.


Hope that helps!

Regards



Odin2
Brodie-001The Demon - The Fighter - The Fallen - The Survivor
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday 15:45 2020
Sure, what do you need?



Odin2
Brodie-001The Demon - The Fighter - The Fallen - The Survivor
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Saturday 15:45 2020
What article is it? You really need to give people more information in your messages. If it's about your Shade-129 article, then I've already left some detailed info earlier in your talk page. I can't just do everything for you, if you want to make your article canon-friendly then I'd recommend looking on Halopedia for help.


What's up? DemonsofHope »Anonymous ONI agent« [COMMS] [SERVICE RECORD]

Erm. Did you need something? — Nanosoldier

After just reading your article, I can tell you are probably in distress. Shade is obviously an NCF article so I'll give you a few pointers.

  • Firstly, the name Shade is a rather odd name, even in the 26th century. Here I suggest you name him after yourself or some person who actually exists in real-life.
  • Secondly, you're very vague on describing events, no offence. I personally refer to John-117 as a baseline image for a SPARTAN character. (But never plagiarise from one of the best characters of all time).
  • Lastly, seeing that his parents died when he was 3, it's unlikely he'd immediately want to avenge them. The idea of using his father's weapon during the SPARTAN-II program is also unlikely as his parents would be erased from his memory long ago.

Just a heads up, covert ops isn't a battle, let alone an actual organisation. And you'll need to increase his height. All Spartans were around 7 feet tall. (Change the day of his birth as well due to its universal status. That's basically all cleared up. If you want more help you can message me again or ask someone else. Good luck! — Nanosoldier

Perhaps I was being too vague. I'll take the liberty of pointing out everything.

  • To change the actual page name, there's a drop down menu next to the edit button that says rename.
  • in the early life section, I suggest you really revise his SPARTAN training. To say that Halsey but him under tests to confirm his involvement in the program is NCF. Every Soartan candidate were brought to Reach against their will because they had a superior physicality and intellect than that of their peers.
  • Having a SPARTAN that hates all life is unrealistic. A SPARTAN wouldn't hate life since he's literally training for the sake of humanity.
  • For the sake of 'been there, done that', give Andrew a more unique personality. Making a soft, caring person or a soldier determined to set his marks high.

Hope this helps. (Remember to edit your infobox and overlook your punctuation and spelling) — Nanosoldier

Spamming warning

Eyes
SonasaurusThe Cabal is watching you, <insert name here>
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — 19:05, November 7, 2012 (EST)
This is an administrative warning for you to cease your spamming of useless messages on other users' talk pages. I realize that you're looking for help, but at this point you've already sent the same message to at least a dozen users, half of which begs the redundant question of "can I ask you something?" Talk page messages are for just that, so don't ask someone if you can ask them something. Just ask it.

I'll also point out that you simply seem to be asking for the same things you asked before, and a large part of the community has already helped you in every way they can short of doing your work for you. Just scroll through your talk page messages and you should be able to find everything you need. But do not ask other users to fix your issues for you. It is your writing, you have been given the proper advice to fix it, so you must do so yourself.

I've already received multiple complaints about this entire matter but I had hoped you would be able to resolve it without my needing to resort to this. Please take note that the next time you send a user a message asking any of the above mentioned questions, you will be issued a short term ban for spamming.


Savier zerker
Anonymous ONI agent - Gwneud o dân, a gyda chalonnau wneud o iâ.
"From this moment onward, you are Egon Talorus. And to humanity, you are everything.":

TALK - 04:58, November 24, 2012 (UTC)
You really haven't caused anyone trouble, aside from that spamming thing. In fact, NCF articles are really only troublesome when the author doesn't try to fix them. Honestly, your page has been improved greatly since it was first created, but it still has a ways to go. Here's what you should do:
  • Change the Name to Andrew-129.
  • Change the picture. That's MJOLNIR [GEN2] armor, which SPARTAN-IIs don't wear.
  • Use proper spelling and grammar. You could write the best story ever, but if you don't use proper spelling and grammar, almost no one will want to read it. Treat your article like you're writing a school paper, and you're being graded on spelling. If spelling and grammar isn't something that comes easily to you, try using a spellchecker.

Finally, I'd just like to note that SPARTAN is written in all-caps, like so. That is, unless you're talking about real, ancient Spartans, in which case only the 'S' is capitalized.

Good luck!




Savier zerker
Anonymous ONI agent - Gwneud o dân, a gyda chalonnau wneud o iâ.
"From this moment onward, you are Egon Talorus. And to humanity, you are everything.":

TALK - 16:37, November 24, 2012 (UTC)
Well, if you plan to make a SPARTAN-IV, I suggest taking a look at my SPARTAN-IV character, Leon Sikowsky, to get an idea of how to write your page. SPARTAN-IV characters are a bit different than SPARTAN-IIs or IIIs, such as that they don't have tags, and are willingly recruited as adults.

Alternatively, you could make a SPARTAN-III character and have him grafted into the SPARTAN-IVs later on. If you go this route, just remember to put the right letter in front of his/her tag in correspondence to the company to which they belong (A### for Alpha Company, B### for Beta Company, and G### for Gamma Company; for example Carter and Jun belong to Alpha Company, so their tags are A259 and A266 respectively, while Noble 6 and Kat are Beta Company SPARTANs, and have the tags B312 and B320).




Savier zerker
Anonymous ONI agent - Gwneud o dân, a gyda chalonnau wneud o iâ.
"From this moment onward, you are Egon Talorus. And to humanity, you are everything.":

TALK - 00:40, November 25, 2012 (UTC)
I do, actually, but unfortunately I'm unable to play it whenever I feel like it. My gamertag is Ch1ck3nFr1kaS33, if you want to add me, but I won't be online at all until Monday night.



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