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I have added the template to your page. Just enter in the information. Of course, you do not need to fill out every section. If you have any questions regarding the template usage, feel free to ask. ~Hyper Zergling 04:31, October 26, 2013 (UTC)


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Which article? What kind of stuff do you want help on? Like proofreading or fact checking? I'll do my best.


My only article. Vengance Class Super-heavy Cruiser. Facts and proofreading. Ez'rathel (talk) 12:11, October 28, 2013 (UTC)


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Ok, I'll check it over when I'm out of class. As a note, though, when someone leaves a message on your talk page, you'll want to reply on that persons talk page, not your own. That way they get a notification and know to reply.

EDIT: Just took a look at the page. The ship itself is ridiculously long, but that can't really be a point against it, seeing as the Covenant had at least one ship longer. As far as editing, you may want to create subdivided sections (as I'll show how to do below) to talk about some of the different aspects (weapons, propulsion, sensors, hull, shielding, etc.) and then further expand on some of the concepts already on the page. You will probably also, for realism's sake, want to make note of the fact that the creation of such a massive ship would be a serious financial endeavor for the UNSC---probably not a lot of these ships in service, if there's even more than one. As far as history, you'll probably want to expand on the design phase, the building of the ship itself, and it's service in combat.



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Well, I think a good start would be to elaborate on the building process, and how exactly the UNSC and Sangheili came to a point, diplomatically, where they could collaborate on a project that would enhance Human power so much (seeing as relations portrayed in the canon post-war era seem cold or even unfriendly). And second, unless the original commission years stretch over a very long period of time, it seems impractical to have even that many. Infinity's construction took twenty years, and even if the UNSC put massive resources into rebuilding efforts (as they likely would) it would take time to grow to the construction capacity that they had during the war, much less surpass it. You may want to reduce the number of ships created somewhat, especially if they're that big.


Re: Article help

You frigate has way too many pelicans it can fit in it. Assuming the other transport is even larger, I'll say you'll only be able to have up to ten dropships total. ~Hyper Zergling 15:44, November 13, 2013 (UTC)


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Dat Experiment. ~Ez' rathel 01:27, November 15, 2013 (UTC)

RE:Vengeance-class Super-heavy Cruiser

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Its plain to see to anyone reading the article that the UHST is some future form of the UNSC - though I see no point in the name change. Also, usually people collaborate to create extended universes - few people do it by themselves. Asking someone else out of the blue to write out a back-story for your alternate universe probably won't yield any fruit at all. So you may want to ask another user to collaborate in creating a universe - perhaps talk to some other users about to bounce ideas off of you.

Also, you may want to keep all stuff regarding the page on the page. Its sort of site custom and makes everything a lot more straightforward.

Final thing I wanted to ask was: again, this vessel would be so far in the future of the Halo verse that is really have little to do with the plot of the game or even the Universe. I would seriously recommend moving the timeline back to late 2500s to very early 2600s, and creating ship classes in this time frame - I would also recommend it simply to keep it relevant to the Haloverse and all.


RE: Question

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Of course I'd be glad to help in my administrative capacity, but as for it being a side-project, I won't be offering my services as a co-writer, if that's what you mean.


RE: Question

Questions found here Yeah I may be able to help you, but it would depend on what it is :) (~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 08:26, December 27, 2013 (UTC))

RE: RE:

Well, ships\fleets aren't really the normal fanon types I do, but I can try in help you to what my abilities allow.

Anyway I reckon it would be easier if we discussed these things over at the IRC and if we're both online we could talk further. (~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 04:41, December 28, 2013 (UTC))

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Hmm, well I’m not quite sure I’m ready to put much more effort into a project other than The Great War, I’ve only started getting into the third of about forty articles, but I still may be able to throw in a few ideas or possibly help you in another way.

Some of your ideas that you mentioned sound alright, but I suggest that you consider changing the name of the Vengeance-class - vengeance sounds more assault and for it being a “mobile military city/fortress” sounds more defence, but thats a little thing doesn’t matter that much.

I don’t quite understand, why would IRC hate you? honestly when you log in, you don’t always have to talk to people, I normally just speak what I need to.

You don’t know how to upload images? Theres an icon on the left of the screen while editing, you click it than go to “choose file” and find the image you desire on your desktop and finally upload.

And thank you for the offer, I may take you up on it in the future, but I’m intending to have The Great War as a solo project for the moment. :)

(~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 05:50, December 29, 2013 (UTC))

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Well as I said the name was a little thing :)

Its good to see you’ve got a lot of ideas flowing - means your inspired, which is good for the article. Reminds me when I started writing TGW (you’ve seen some of how much was/is in my head). Anyway I’m guessing by the size of the ship is that it is a post Human-Promethean War vessel, seeing that its a lot bigger than the Infinity. So what I would like to know is, what is the exact decade was the Vengeance planned and what years they were in service, also its a heavily armed war vessel so what battles are currently going on in the galaxy and finally what are the exact things did you want me to help you with. :)

About the image

What you need is a scanner, but if you don’t already have one it would be pretty expensive so… :/

And yeah I get what you mean about the RE thing, I was just have fun. (~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 06:38, January 1, 2014 (UTC))

Late RE:

Sorry I haven’t written back in a couple of days, I haven’t really been productive anywhere at the moment :/

I honestly wouldn’t know what to write about the galleon-hull-armor either, I kinda lack knowledge in that area, sorry.

What I suggest you do is create a page titled something like UNSC Navy (2568) (I don’t know what the exact year this war is, but it just an example). Anyway this page could give readers an idea of what sort of conflicts and stuff the fleet is wing used for, it would also give you somewhere to link all your articles together.

(~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 09:39, January 7, 2014 (UTC))

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Well I sort of get the idea of making infoboxes and templates and it is something that I am interested in learning more about, but I’m probably not the best person to ask, I am still a newish wikia user and have much to learn. You could try this, but honestly I like the look of your current one, if your talking about the info box your using for your ships that is. I recommend you ask Sona or someone else on the admin team, they’ve all been here awhile and know how things go.

And I may be able to help you with that other thing you mentioned, but when you approach me about it be very specific on all details, so I understand and don’t have to message you about such details.

Finally, about the last message I sent, I got no idea what I meant to say on that last line "fleet is wing used for" where it says wing, it may have supposed to say "being". :\

(~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 05:48, January 12, 2014 (UTC))

Re Talk

I'm alright, though I'm slowing down a bit with my work, just deciding what directions to take and I'm also pretty worn out, I've been working non stop for three months and need to slow down. I probably wont have anything new that'll be ready to read for a couple of weeks, but schools starting again soon so it could be longer. (~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 05:03, January 26, 2014 (UTC))

Well I actually really like the concept of the Covenant material, though the article needs a bit more depth, but thats no problem its a new article. (~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 05:15, January 26, 2014 (UTC))

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I actually reckon there could still be more room for expansion on Veradnium, but it doesn't matter that much, short articles aren't bad ones, anyway you don't need to do it now.

I'm currently working on the Covenant's page, but as I said there isn't going to be much incoming content on my articles for a couple of weeks, though I just got the Halo Wars strategy guide today so I will now be able to find anything I could have missed in TGW. I'm kind of on a hiatus at the moment and my final year of school is about to start so progress will slow down. It'll be best if you just check up on my pages every couple of weeks for a look instead of messaging me about it, on my profile near the to of got a small spot called my current projects and they will be the articles i'm mainly focusing on. Also because my work is slowing a bit I've added "(Constructing)" on the side of each section on the pages I'm currently working on so readers can understand they're not ready to be read and have incoming content, so when you see that a section no longer has "(Constructing)" by it you know its read to be read :)

(~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 03:32, February 1, 2014 (UTC))

For future responses

Please use the article's talk page, not my user talk page. Keeping the conversation with the article - where other users may read it in one place and add to it as they wish - is far more conductive to discussion of the article. Thanks for your understanding. Auguststorm1945 (Talk) 04:22, March 3, 2014 (UTC)

Curiosity

Actually, I have a few general questions for you, if you're up it:

  1. What is the UHST? How do they replace the UNSC?
  2. Why "Crucifix Shipyards"? Just curious.
  3. Is there a story or plot that involves your ships and related articles?

Auguststorm1945 (Talk) 04:47, March 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re: Apology?

Dont worry I wasn't offended, but honestly I don't see why a congratulation could be rude in any way. I was probably messaging about something else at the time (as seen higher up on this page), hence there being no reply (~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 01:22, April 1, 2014 (UTC))

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Oh, I see, well I didnt get that when I read it, but I can understand that someone could misread it, I already new you really liked my works you see, so it would have confused me if I thought you had written something intentionally offensive :/ anyway problem / confusion solved (~ Samdoo (Talk) (Contribs) ☺︎ 04:22, April 8, 2014 (UTC))

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Hey there! Yeah, this is happening. And it's not because EclypseDusk was trying to get us on your back, it's because of your own decision on how to act on his talk page immediately after LOMI reminded you we have rules on this site about remaining civil. But hey, it's not a ban. Maybe you're just having a bad night, and it's a first instance kind of thing. But we have taken notice, and we're not impressed with the way you've comported yourself tonight.

Y'know, despite your claims about the artwork, it was good enough for you to decide to compliment by using in the first place rather than find some high-def CGI spaceship from Google images. You could've at least been courteous to the artist. So, maybe take a break, see how you feel about it in the morning, and perhaps consider making amends. Who knows? You could help them get acquainted with the site and work on something together, him doing the art and you helping with infoboxes and wiki markup. And, if you'd like to make a sarcastic remark in response to that optimistic idea, I'll accept it, so long as your language remains civil. Now have a good one apart from this and go think about what you've done. Regards, That Damn Sniper.



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