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leave your comments--101stranger 23:38, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I am going to write a story, and would like another person to help write.--101stranger 01:19, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

I'll help, if you want. -Scot 113 16:36, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Cool. Thanks. -Scot 113 03:24, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. I'll put Scot-G113 and maybe Arsenio-036. Scot 113 03:39, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I'm going to put Cy-038 and Owyn-259. If I put Scot and Arsenio it'd break my Halo Fanon universe's canon (lol, tecnically impossible, cause it's a fanon's canon being broken!). Unless I rewrite my fanon for Scot, it's Cy and Owyn. - Scot 113 01:58, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind, just Cy. - Scot 113 01:55, January 28, 2010 (UTC)


Supersmall
MaslabI am assuming direct control.I am the harbinger of your destiny.Preserve <insert name here>'s body if possible.Releasing control.
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"hey 118, im getting tired off people saying my articles are bad, I may not be the best writer in the world, but if there is a problem with my articles tell me instead of putting it all over a talk page"
―You on 118's talk page


That's what talk pages are for. We're telling you what's wrong with an article and what you can do to fix it (the last part only sometimes).



RE:Problemos

Here is the problem; people leave message on article talk pages so the owner of the page reads it and makes changes. Thats the entire point of it. The community is attempting to spur the owner to fix the article, so it be come a decent part of the communities collection of articles. You would rather have all the problems with your articles redirected to your talk page? Unfortunately, that requires an extra 30 seconds of effort which no one wants to give, since it is already on the talkpage.

Sorry, but nothing can or will be done in that regard.

Rainbow_Dash.pngRainbow Dash (Talk)(Contribs)  

ok. i just don't like the rude comments. i'm a new user, and i'm still learning.--101stranger 18:35, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

and i ment other people's talk pages--101stranger 23:56, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Tip. If you want to leave a message or reply back. do it on their respective talk page. Not yours. [I wake up. To see nothing][Everything is silent] [The Dark Grey Clouds foretell][An Ominous End]|Prepare For The Inevitable

Hello

Hey there. Feel free to ask me with any questions you might have too. Also, I haven't done an RP in years and was wondering if you were interested in doing a small one with me. \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


I'm not sure, maybe just a traditional battle taking place in early 2552. \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


Headings in Article

Just to let you know, to make a heading look better, use equal signs on each side. So Early life as a heading would be typed as ==Early Life= and a subtopic, maybe if the character's father died during his/her child, it would be ===Father's Death===. This betters the article's appeal. \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


Re: John Chase

I know the pic's a bit out of place, its just a temporary fix until I can get a better one.\\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


No Problem - \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\



LOMISig2
Lordofmonsterisland — There are... no strings... on me...
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Yes, it's fine as far as I can see



Sig

To change your sig, you make a new page that starts with Template:, so you could make it something like Template:Strangersig. Then, you would use code to make it look as you want. To post it, you would put {{Strangersig}} at the end of a post. P.S. Sorry I haven't been on in a while; grades have been iffy lately.\\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


That looks good, but you might want to put it in <sup></sup> brackets, which would make it look like this, or change the color using these brackets: <font color="color goes in quotation marks"></font>. Using one or both can help people tell your sig from your post. Speaking of which, I'm going to change the color of my sig...\\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


Dean

Okay, I'll cowrite it. Just let me know if I'm going out of place or if you have any plans for it. Thanks, \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


You can be quiet about bything you want to say about my articles

--COMPY3000 00:17, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

No, thats not how it works. I was identifying problems with the article; and I don't find it to be my responsibility to do so. Anywho, I'm busy rooting out NCF articles, and too busy for this crap. Rainbow_Dash.pngRainbow Dash (Talk)(Contribs)  

Re: Dean

I was thinking we could have dean join up with a colonial militia like Johnson did in Contact Harvest, except he wouldn't be there to train but only to reinforce. \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


New Sniper

Okay then. Will do. \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


You know, I was thinking that maybe we could write each of the two on our own for RPing.

Yeah, something of that sort would work out.\\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\

\\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


Maybe just a showdown against two Jackal Snipers, or maybe he dies when a UNSC ship is boarded. He could also be killed when he encounters a chieftain, zealot, hunters, or heavy vehicle opposition. \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


Schaub

I fixed the templates up. And also, you can press the source button on the taskbar and then you can click on the "Writer" and "Under Construction" links to more easily insert these templates. Try this if you haven't already and good luck. \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\



Despair
Another Poetic SpartanI am the arankaru or the broken mask to many.. My Blade can be your fall or your salvation However, my blade is a manifestation of my soul. Therefore, when I attack you, you will feel me in your being. When my true form is released. It is resurekushion or returning blade. Zangetsu remains in my heart. My shikai or initial form remains. Bankai is my final form unleashed. This will lead to the way of the Demon.
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS SADNESS. LOVE. ANGER. HATE. JEALOUSLY.
Sorry. But no.


Chase/UFRH

Thanks with the feedback for Chase. On the other hand, I was hoping to make the UFRH and the main branches, including the Ranger Scout Service, on my own for now, but soon I'll let you join in full swing. It's just that I want to get my full base story and plans on the site. If you want, though, you could make your own unit, special forces group, or maybe make the branch that would be "the next ONI." If you're interested in any of this, let me know... Actually, I just thought for a moment and brainstormed a bit of a list on things you could make:

    • A unit in any branch (Just keep in mind that if you make a large unit, the Navy isn't in any good of a shape until some years after 2570 and the combined ground infantry doesn't reach 1,000,000 until the early 2570's)
    • The UFRH's Military Intelligence unit, basically ONI's successor.
    • A character in any branch but the Ranger Scout Service, but I'll open them up soon since I haven't expanded much on them.
    • I've been wanting to create a Naval special forces unit too, but I haven't had the time nor could I come up with a name for the soldiers in the unit. This unit would basically be inspired by ODST's and NAVSPECWAR operators and would use the same armor as ODST's along with other combat suits.
    • Any ideas for the Covenant or more for the Sangheili. All that I have is that they're now the Sangheili Protectorate, they and Humans hope to expand trade to one another, and they have a colony in the Human-controlled Epsilon Mara System
    • I need some ideas for the Battle of Earth during the Splinter War, if you want to know what happened so far, [section] gives some insight. Basically, the Colonial Protectorate, a rebel faction, sends waves of what's left of their forces to assault Earth for weeks before they eventually bomb the planet to who knows where in a last-ditch effort to weaken pro-UNSC forces. (Also, if you weren't sure, the UNSC collapsed before the Splinter War, leaving the leaderless former UNSC forces to fight in its name through the war. Afterward, they form the UFRH.
    • If you have any new vehicle, ship, aircraft, or weapon ideas we could work them in to.
    • If you have any ideas from these suggestions or have a different idea in mind, let me know before you make the article. Thanks, \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\

\\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


You can check out this list here and let me know what you want to do.\\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


Ok. The only thing that I ask is that you don't name it the BR56 since it'll be a lower cost company and model, so maybe like M19 Battle Rifle or something like that. While I'm at it, I'll make the heavier battle rifle right now, too. \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


BR12

Two things I forgot to tell you, so its not your fault:

  • Misriah Armories collapsed in the 2550's so the BR12 will need another manufacturer. I'm working on a new company and maybe that could be it when I post it.
  • The UFRH didn't exist during the Splinter War; the collapsed over the course of a few weeks before the Splinter War and the UFRH was formed by the treaty that ended the war.

Again, I forgot to tell you so I take the blame and I'll fix it up too. Should I add an image? \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\


SURPRISE!

0rbital2
0rbitalNone venture shall till dusk.
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Monday, August 3 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)... Clickie the amazing quote. ^^
No problemos on the sig, and I don't mind you doing that either. And I like the Shadows name, so we can go with that.




Darn it, new sig's not workin, hold on a sec, and you can make the sidearm and the Shadows sounds good too. \\ .LEADERSHIP FORGES ENEMIES. \\ \\ .DIVIDED WE SKIRMISH. \\ \\ .UNITED... WE ARE 0RBITAL. \\ \\ .COMM SYSTEMS ONLINE. \\



0rbital2
0rbitalNone venture shall till dusk.
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Monday, August 3 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)... Clickie the amazing quote. ^^
Thanks, and I do like the name, I'll start its page. (sorry I took forever)




{{0rbital2|text=Heres the article.

Picture

0rbital2
0rbitalNone venture shall till dusk.
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Do you mind if I change it cuz I wanted to put up something that didn't look like a BR55?





LOMISig2
Lordofmonsterisland — There are... no strings... on me...
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Thanks for the compliment, but I don't have much good advice. Basically there are three things you should do: (1) see if there's any canon places or battles that are relatively unknown and not fleshed out, as they're good for fanon; (2) think of battles that would be cool, and story arcs that would work well too; and (3) it takes a lot of time. I've been working on Riker for a year and a half now, and the works just getting slower and slower. The further you go, the less steam you have and the harder it gets to write (usually)



0rbital2
0rbitalNone venture shall till dusk.
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Monday, August 3 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)... Clickie the amazing quote. ^^
I see where you're coming from, but the BR12 was going to be of a different production line. We could keep it though, if you want. The other battle rifle pic I had in mind was the one below, but then again, it is your article, so you can make the choice. (Click the picture to enlarge)

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Re:RP

0rbital2
0rbitalNone venture shall till dusk.
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Monday, August 3 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)... Clickie the amazing quote. ^^
Ok, just remember that this Shadow you make won't be a shadow quite yet since this battle is part of the Splinter War. He would be either an ODST or part of NAVSPECWAR.





0rbital2
0rbitalNone venture shall till dusk.
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On the note of the weapons, I think I'll just go with the M6N because I wanna make new series for other weapon types, otherwise it'll just be another post-war series. And for the SPARTAN, I'll think about it. I want to give a few people a shot.




SPARTAN-077

0rbital2
0rbitalNone venture shall till dusk.
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Monday, August 3 2020 (Eastern Standard Time)... Clickie the amazing quote. ^^
I fixed some of the spelling and grammar. Just remember, "i before e except after c and in certain other cases. :P Also, since I'm not planning to have too many members in the RP, I think I'll allow 077 to be in it.




Sig/RP

You can go ahead with taking command of alpha. Just remember that its made up of one cruiser, a few destroyers, and a few armed frigates due to lack of available warships. And on the sig, its not bad. Good job on the "Hooah" part because most people that I know think the Rangers say Oorah when in fact they're totally different. --0RBITAL 23:42, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Thar

Hola! (This is 0rbital's main account, by the way.) --[The_Bøøkkeeper.] 00:00, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Go ahead and post it then, and long time no see! :P --[The_Bøøkkeeper.] [INFINITYVERSE] 22:09, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I've wasted most of my good ideas on various pages I've been working on, over here. For castaway, it could just be your traditional type of battle: a few UNSC ships against much stronger Covenant ships that keep the battle short and sweet. --SPARTAN Icon2 Talk 23:27, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Carson

At this point, I'm not sure that I'm still doing the RP. There are other's going on. Try going on the IRC and ask around for any active stuff. --SPARTAN Icon2 Talk 22:03, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Dean Update

Okie dokie. --À la prochaine et Bonne Chonce 20:39, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re:Article in progress

Hmm, I think it should be a Special Forces, like modern Rangers. If you want to see some examples of my special forces, check out Special Warfare Directorate. The Rangers in my personal universe have been designed to be light, swift, and very precise. Essentially, they are an elite counter-terrorism/unconventional infantry force. Also, if you want, I could come up with a base paragraph for the page. --Rozh (Message) 21:46, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okie dokie then :) --Rozh (Message) 23:06, July 17, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean?

"Wow scott got alot better."
―You


What do you mean by that? Me, my behavior or my article? But thank you for the compliment. :) Also, welcome back. I haven't seen you in a while. - I meant to do that!

I haven't, but now I will. - I meant to do that!

Nice. ;) If you're interested, you could check out my new RP that I'm working on. You could be the first to join in on the fun :) --Rozh (Message) 23:25, July 17, 2010 (UTC)


Carpe
CarpeJugulumWell, if you are honestly going to read this, you should soon realize that there is, in fact, nothing really written here. Good day to you, <insert name here>
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No problem, but where did I leave that comment? I remember what you're talking about, just not the article. :P




Hope
CarpeJugulumThe day is coming when we will say, "Truly, they were noble."
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — No man knows the day.
Oh yeah! Again, no problem.



Re:Dean Saunders

Alright, I'll be sure to check it out. Sangheili FieldM 01 Don't make a girl a promise if you can't keep it.

Whats up? --Pete-654 (talk) 22:37, February 28, 2013 (UTC)

This is my rifle
Achillies Reborn - In Fate We Trust, Seize the day:
TALK - 17:38, April 2, 2013 (UTC)
Thanks 101 glag you like, yeh if I ever see anything i will let you know.


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