Wow. This is really well-written. Good job
Cool[]
Very good. I already want to read more!--Maslab 03:42, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
- Lol do you think the ending to Chapter 8 was too "Star Wars"-ish? —Fear is not a weakness, but a realization
Only a bit. It happens more than you think. But we do have a conflict now with Seeds of Doubt. If the destruction of the Holy Artifact has to do with Halo's destruction, then you're 'Refumee is still on Stoic Courier while mine is already in the gas mine. --Maslab 03:35, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
Alright, cool. Thanks. --Maslab 03:35, 25 May 2009 (UTC)
Good job. It set up Autel nicely. It seems you have plans for Fira. Will he still be around in 2572? And we do have another conflict with Seeds of Doubt. It seems Sesa 'Refumee arrives just after Halo's destruction, while in Seeds of Doubt, he's already stationed in the mine.
Chapter 9's name actually isn't a reference to the Halo: Combat Evolved level. It means both Autel and Fira are taking over a Jiralhanae-controlled vessel; Autel the control centre of CCS-U572, and Fira the control centre of Stoic Courier. —Fear is not a weakness, but a realization
Confusion[]
The Legacies are all mixed around. What exactly is the order of the stories. EpsilonIndi 02:30, January 1, 2011 (UTC)