I am now going to CASTRATE Sona with a butter knife if he doesn't remove what he added.
Sonasaurus — Yo, I'm real happy for you and all, and Imma let you finish, but... TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Canada Eastern-Standard Time
Yo Stel, that's nice and all. I'm really happy for you, I'm gonna let you finish. But ONIrecon111 has one of the best Sangheili articles of all time! One of the best Sangheili articles...of all time!!!
"Unknown of what role he will play as of yet." He's going to play an important role, I need to talk to you about it sometime in private. Oh yeah, and since you're helping me with that story, you're probably going to do a lot of writing for one particular part I have in mind.
Stellar Elite — Whenever I think up of ideas, that car is symbolic for my brain TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 (Pacific Standard Time)
Get on the IRC in time then.
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Sonasaurus — Within its barren layers, something has been held for aeons
In the introduction you use this: "A enigma shrouded in mystery and dispair", that's a tad redundant, as an enigma is, essentially, a mystery; also it should be "despair".
In the aftermath section, you use an ellipsis, I'd suggest removing that, as an article isn't meant to create suspense or tension - it's just meant to give you a detailed summary of their life, etc.
Thirdly, he meets a Spartan on Installation 05? And then, because of said contact, creates the beginnings of the UNSC-Elite alliance? Seems a bit dodgy (Please excuse the Northern Irish colloquialism).
And finally, your sub-sectioning has failed in a couple of places; being: Under: Pulled Out and Hurol City.
Though, not directly linked to the things I noted, there's a lot of empty sections...
But all in all, a pretty decent article! Keep it up! Joshua(Talk) (Contribs) 11:24, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
Stellar Elite — Whenever I think up of ideas, that car is symbolic for my brain TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 (Pacific Standard Time)
Done and done.
Oh, and the sections? Yeah, after Sona added the backround to my article, it's given it custom fonts, which fucked the sections up REAL bad.
Wow, you work fast! :D Ah, so that explains why I can't read it when signed in...I had to log out to read your article. :| Joshua(Talk) (Contribs) 11:56, January 1, 2011 (UTC)
Hey just reading the article and I came across this sentance:
After the Great Schism, Stel's personality went pratically backwards. Stel was originally a selfish, temperimental, loud and cocky Sangheili, yet after the Schism, he is a generous, calm, quiet and polite person.
I think two of the post-schism personality traits are incorrect. Those two being quiet and calm. Unless your reffering to some of the AAO stories/articles Stel is in. I don't see Stel not losing his temper or making a lot of noise (perhaps being in the military makes it hard to be quiet).
But anyway, the article is awesome! He needs to be included in something to do with TSC :P
Nanosoldier — You[PERSIST] too long after your own[DEFEAT]. [COME THEN], [WARRIOR]. Have your[RESOLUTION] TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 [REQUIEM]
Oh my god.
I know where that image is from. And you wouldn't like to know. o.o
I very much like this character, Stel. But I must ask why he must be so violent and also why he responds agressively when people mention his green eye. It's not so uncommon is it? I mean Rtas 'Vadum has green eyes. — Rex(Talk To Me) (My Work)
Stellar Elite — Whenever I think up of ideas, that car is symbolic for my brain TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 (Pacific Standard Time)
Another unneeded comment.
1. He's violent because that's how he is. It's how he was made, and it's how he was brought up.
2. Rtas didn't have green eyes. Most Sangheili have yellow eyes, and Stel was born with the rare case of having lime green and blue eyes. However, Stel does wear a membrane that hides the color of his eyes, since he's very shy about it.
There is no such thing as a unneeded question, only a question. And I didn't mean any offense. P.S. i was referencing Rtas from Halo 2 (I think he looked better with green eyes personally).
I do believe Rtas' eyes are green because he's wearing some kind of lens. If you recall, Thel's eyes seemed to be dark when he was wearing armour at the beginning of Halo 2, but they were clearly orange after being tortured and branded. He was probably wearing lens too. Also, remember in Halo CE, Sangheili eyes are a translucent tint of the same colour as their armour. Again, probably something covering the eyes.
I was reading this article yet again, and I noticed in the Battle for Doisac that you stated that Tir-D-yar (a villian) was introduced. At one point that was true, however he has since been included in Halo: Honor and Reconciliation. Although he may not have been a villain then. If this is an error, please fix it :D. If it was intentional, my entire point was pointless :P
Ebon Shadowshot — Eins, zwei, drei... Ugh, I do not think we brought enough body bags TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 (English Standard Time)
Nice to see our administration is so very mature. Also nice to see that certain users with limited internet access use up their valuable time posting semi-funny comments. Sonasaurus|Talk•Contribs 17:36, March 2, 2012 (EST)
I just thought of this quote in my story, and I thought you might like to use it: "We should not seek answers from questions we did not ask."
Umm, how on earth did Stel lose his arm?Vman0 (talk) 06:17, April 17, 2015 (UTC)
Such a BLEEDINGLY OBVIOUS question, I had to rise from the grave to answer it! Stel lost his arm on Reach while he was trying to get off-world, trying not to be glassed, and he was attacked by a fleeing Spartan. The few Sangheili that knew of his wounds don't hold him in a very high light anymore. Shame. Don't touch anything. Move along, citizen.
Overlooking the not particularly astute question posed, zomg a Stel. How Stellar. Scootaloo(Talk)•(Contribs) 11:49, May 3, 2015 (UTC)
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(My bark is probably bigger than my bite) 22:05, March 2, 2012 (UTC)
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Scootaloo (Talk) • (Contribs) 11:49, May 3, 2015 (UTC)
Don't touch anything. Move along, citizen.