Note that naming a team "Actual" isn't used in any modern military nor even in the UNSC Defense Forces. "Actual" refers to the commanding officer or temporary commander of a particular unit, ship, etc. For example:
"Noble Actual to Noble Actual, we have unconfirmed reports of URF activity in your sector, be advised that rebels have obtained secret documents pertaining to fleet movements in Epsilon Eridani. Noble Actual, get it done. Noble Actual, out."
―Mimicking Colonel Urban Holland's order method (INCORRECT)
"Noble Actual to Noble, we have unconfirmed reports of URF activity in your sector, be advised that rebels have obtained secret documents pertaining to fleet movements in Epsilon Eridani. Noble Team, get it done. Noble Actual, out."
―Mimicking Colonel Urban Holland's order method (CORRECT)
Nano, please refrain from undoing people's edits. That kind of action is reserved for administrators and rollbackers. Also, in the section Luxor Cadet (2529-2530), please note that there is a minor inconsistancy. You said that in 2624, Jackson and Emile rescued 12 drowning studets. I'm assuming that it is a typo, supposed to be 2524? That cannot be accurate as the section is from 2529-2530, not 2524-2530. However, you said he was born in 2523, which means he would be 1 year old at the time he rescued them! Please fix this, as it is extremely illogical. Cheers, my good man. =)
Phalanx Actual — We are the Dead. Short days ago We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow, Loved and were loved, and now we lie, In Flanders fields. TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Thursday, March 28 2024 (Central Standard Time)
"Jackson, get your ass on the line, NOW!"
―Unknown Soldier, Call of Duty 4
Cool article.
Nanosoldier — You[PERSIST] too long after your own[DEFEAT]. [COME THEN], [WARRIOR]. Have your[RESOLUTION] TALK • CONTRIBUTIONS — Thursday, March 28 2024 [REQUIEM]
I thought I would get real feedback :'(. Well like what the title says:
Please give some feedback on this article, my first article that I actually wanted to develop on.
Regards, —
Dude, according to the article, it still says that he was one year old when he rescued those 12 drowning students. If you don't fix it soon, it will have to have an unrealistic template on it. — Rex(Talk To Me) (My Work)
Pictures[]
Where do you get these? I need some pictures for my new fanon, the SEAL-II Program. I know it isn't out yet, but I'm working on it. --Echowaffle8 16:17, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
Also, I forgot how to run a template - I haven't been on in quite some time! --Echowaffle8 16:19, July 26, 2011 (UTC)
I just read this and it occurred to me that Jackson couldn't have officially participated in the Loss of Hope or the Battle of the Zenith Complex, as he would never have made it there.
Rank[]
Sonasaurus — They are coming for us...who will stand together?
If this Spartan is in AAO, he can't hold a reserved rank (See here). I suggest you either make a timeline divergence, reduce his rank, or withdraw him from AAO if you must. Sorry about that, but we have to prevent our massive universe from overflowing with high-ranking Spartans, it just isn't ideal if there are too many of them.
Technically, I think Ajax was the first red-visored Spartan on Halo Fanon. Might be the first S-III, though.
Typo in image[]
In Jackson's candidate record, there's a part of the 'status' section that reads "desqualified" and I assume was supposed to mean "disqualified." Just felt like bringing it up Underlord1271 (talk) 01:22, 21 March 2022 (UTC)