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Spartan 112The Chosen, The Fated, The Enforcer, The Marine, The Officer, The Baron, The Mercenary, The Hero, The Warrior, The Champion
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"And a Shepherd shall I be, for Thee my Lord, for Thee. Power hath descended forth from Thy hand, that my feet may swiftly carry out Thy command. So I shall flow a river forth to Thee, and teeming with souls shall it ever be. In Nomine Patris, et Filii, et Spiritus Sancti."
――Cpl. Ambrus "Killer" Kovách, overheard while killing Insurrectionists on Baikal II.

Boondock Saints FTW




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MaslabI am assuming direct control.I am the harbinger of your destiny.Preserve <insert name here>'s body if possible.Releasing control.
TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — Friday, April 19 2024 (Pacific Standard Time)
While this is minor, I take issue with the fact that an eight year old boy could possibly beat up three fifteen-sixteen year olds. While it is a nice story and tells the personality of a character very well, it's not realistic. I have not met a single sixteen year old that could be beaten up by the average eight year old, outside the ones with osteogenesis imperfecta. There is one kid about that age I know about who could beat up a sixteen year old, but he has a genetic mutation that, at the age of four, gave him twice the muscle mass and half the body fat of other kids that age.

Other than that, this is a good article. Nice work!




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TALK CONTRIBUTIONS — {{{time}}}, Eastern Standard Time (GMT -5)
Yeah, that happened in the Watchmen book, and was sort of supposed to be a tribute to that little situation, but looking back on that, it's extremely unrealistic. I might just say that they were a couple years older than him (like maybe eleven or twelve)... Thanks for the critiques! And yes, 112, Boondock Saints FTW! Regards.


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