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| − | May someone please give my article [[Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior]] a really good read through and give me ways I can improve. I have heard comments on how it has too many exclamation points (It doesn't have any), and immature styling. Oh, and leave out how many battles I haven't written, cause I know they are there. -- <b>[[User:Sgt.johnson|<font color="Red">Your Worst</font>]] [[User talk:Sgt.johnson|<font color="Red">Enemy</font>]]<sup>[[AJ Lewis|<font color="White"><The Original></font>]] [[Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior|<font color="Red"><The SPARTAN></font>]] [[Halo: Innies Out|<font color="White"><The Thriller></font>]]</sup><sub> [[Halo: Nitroneon Rebellion|<font color="Red"><The Project></font>]]</sub></b> 03:20, 29 March 2008 (UTC) |
+ | May someone please give my article [[Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior]] a really good read through and give me ways I can improve. I have heard comments on how it has too many exclamation points (It doesn't have any), and immature styling. Oh, and leave out how many battles I haven't written, cause I know they are there. I've run the whole thing through word, and the only mispellings exist in the template (Microsoft Word doesn't account for html), and it still doesn't seem good enough. I could use more pictures, but there aren't many very pictures of African-American Marines. -- <b>[[User:Sgt.johnson|<font color="Red">Your Worst</font>]] [[User talk:Sgt.johnson|<font color="Red">Enemy</font>]]<sup>[[AJ Lewis|<font color="White"><The Original></font>]] [[Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior|<font color="Red"><The SPARTAN></font>]] [[Halo: Innies Out|<font color="White"><The Thriller></font>]]</sup><sub> [[Halo: Nitroneon Rebellion|<font color="Red"><The Project></font>]]</sub></b> 03:20, 29 March 2008 (UTC) |
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May someone please give my article Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior a really good read through and give me ways I can improve. I have heard comments on how it has too many exclamation points (It doesn't have any), and immature styling. Oh, and leave out how many battles I haven't written, cause I know they are there. I've run the whole thing through word, and the only mispellings exist in the template (Microsoft Word doesn't account for html), and it still doesn't seem good enough. I could use more pictures, but there aren't many very pictures of African-American Marines. -- Your Worst Enemy<The Original> <The SPARTAN> <The Thriller> <The Project> 03:20, 29 March 2008 (UTC)