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| − | May someone please give my article [[Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior]] a really good read through and give me ways I can improve. I have heard comments on how it has too many exclamation points (It doesn't have any), and immature styling. Oh, and leave out how many battles I haven't written, cause I know they are there. -- <b>[[User:Sgt.johnson|<font color="Red">Your Worst</font>]] [[User talk:Sgt.johnson|<font color="Red">Enemy</font>]]<sup>[[AJ Lewis|<font color="White"><The Original></font>]] [[Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior|<font color="Red"><The SPARTAN></font>]] [[Halo: Innies Out|<font color="White"><The Thriller></font>]]</sup><sub> [[ |
+ | May someone please give my article [[Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior]] a really good read through and give me ways I can improve. I have heard comments on how it has too many exclamation points (It doesn't have any), and immature styling. Oh, and leave out how many battles I haven't written, cause I know they are there. I've run the whole thing through word, and the only mispellings exist in the template (Microsoft Word doesn't account for html), and it still doesn't seem good enough. I could use more pictures, but there aren't many very pictures of African-American Marines. -- <b>[[User:Sgt.johnson|<font color="Red">Your Worst</font>]] [[User talk:Sgt.johnson|<font color="Red">Enemy</font>]]<sup>[[AJ Lewis|<font color="White"><The Original></font>]] [[Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior|<font color="Red"><The SPARTAN></font>]] [[Halo: Innies Out|<font color="White"><The Thriller></font>]]</sup><sub> [[RP:Nitroneon Rebellion|<font color="Red"><The Project></font>]]</sub></b> 03:20, 29 March 2008 (UTC) |
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| + | The article is well written, well thought, and very good in depth. Not sure how to improve it. --[[user:SPARTAN-077| The State]]<sup>([[user talk:SPARTAN-077|Our Decrees and Law]])</sup><sup>([[Special:Contributions/SPARTAN-077|The State Alchemists we've enlisted]])</sup>[[Image:Full-metal-alchemist-wallpaper-03 ad.jpg|60px]] 06:01, 29 March 2008 (UTC) |
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| + | Can someone also give some pointers for me to improve [[Phade Technology Industry]]? {{Subtank}} |
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Latest revision as of 23:24, 11 August 2018
May someone please give my article Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior a really good read through and give me ways I can improve. I have heard comments on how it has too many exclamation points (It doesn't have any), and immature styling. Oh, and leave out how many battles I haven't written, cause I know they are there. I've run the whole thing through word, and the only mispellings exist in the template (Microsoft Word doesn't account for html), and it still doesn't seem good enough. I could use more pictures, but there aren't many very pictures of African-American Marines. -- Your Worst Enemy<The Original> <The SPARTAN> <The Thriller> <The Project> 03:20, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
The article is well written, well thought, and very good in depth. Not sure how to improve it. -- The State(Our Decrees and Law)(The State Alchemists we've enlisted)
06:01, 29 March 2008 (UTC)
Can someone also give some pointers for me to improve Phade Technology Industry? 5ub7ank(7alk)