User talk:Lee 215/Spartan 215

Several things to address:

1. 215 isn't exactly a valid SPARTAN-III tag; keep in mind that SPARTAN-IIIs received numerical designations following the first letter of their Company (e.g. SPARTAN-A239, where A stands for Alpha Company). SPARTAN-III companies are in turn named sequentially after letters of the Greek Alphabet, and there were three such companies active during the Human-Covenant War: Alpha (all personnel, save for Carter, Jun, and Emile, who were pulled beforehand, were killed), Beta (likewise, all personnel, save for Kat and Noble Six, were killed), and Gamma (really the only Company from which you can make a SPARTAN-III. Keep in mind that numerical tags go from 1-300, and that there are tags that are already in use by canonical characters).

2. There was no "Omega Team" formation in the SPARTAN-III program, and SPARTAN-III teams were named after types of blades. If you meant Omega Company, however, it is still invalid: Omega is the twenty-sixth letter sequentially, meaning there would have had to have been 22 SPARTAN-III Companies between the Human-Covenant War and the present before Omega could be formed.

3. 795 and 449 would be invalid tags for any SPARTAN program; the SPARTAN-II Program capped at 150, while each SPARTAN-III company capped at 300 (or slightly above 300). In addition, note that they would need Company tags if they were SPARTAN-III operators.

4. Keep in mind that UNSC spaceborne vessels would have the prefix of UNSC (i.e. UNSC Pillar of Autumn).

5. Small issue, but as one well versed in firearm mechanics, I can tell you that "clip" is an improper, yet, commonly mistaken, term for "Magazine." A magazine itself holds each cartridge (round) and loads them into the firearm, while a clip is essentially several bare rounds, inserted into a firearm with an internal magazine (e.g. M1 garand).

I'd also recommend separating the article into sections, adding a character infobox (which you can copy from any other character article on the site: make sure, though, to change the information in it), and adding an image. If you need help on how to make your character article "look better", try looking at other character articles on the site, such as SPARTAN-091, Arnold Leroy Lewis Junior, or SPARTAN-G023. If you need help with Military information or Halo Canon, feel free to ask our well-versed staff and veterancy.

If you adequately address the issues above, and message an administrator, the tag will be removed. Take note, however, that you cannot remove the tag yourself.