Talk:LEGION (Andromeda Vadum)

{{Ajax Sig2|text=The article is NCF/Unrealistic for the following reasons.

{{ProblemApp }}
 * time=16:50, July 31, 2015 (UTC)
 * reason#=
 * reason=
 * World Dominion: First off, the world dominion thing. First thing, who is going to try and take control of one of the most heavily defended worlds in the galaxy, home of both the UNSC, and ONI, and governmental nations, all of whom are going to be paying very, very close attention to their own backyard. There's more worlds, easier worlds.
 * Energy Weapons: The UNSC has had access to laser and plasma technology for years, and access to alien technology examples for decades, with funding from hundreds of worlds, and humanity's best and brightest working on that. On top of that, how does a two bit con job, with a immunologist, manage to miniaturise and improve upon technology that not even the UNSC has cracked yet?
 * ONI: ONI is one of the largest intelligence agencies in exist. With the ability to remotely monitor people from light years away, hundreds of AIs running counter intelligence, vigilant agents and so on. How does a terrorist organization manage to establish an entire (And completely redundant) branch of ONI, and none of the tens of thousands of ONI personnel realise they've been mass infiltrated?
 * Now their military. They have literally no funding. Their organisation is made up of a PMC group and some russian rebels, and yet they manage to create a military, with advance gunships, main battle tanks, armed troops, and Spartan-IVs. Given that a Spartan alone can bankrupt a small country, and so on. How on earth do they afford this, or have upkeep for them? How do they even get the resources and technology for this, when the Insurrection can barely even make bombs without the UNSC homing in on them?
 * solution#=
 * solution=The biggest solution for this would be a total rethink. The entire thing comes off as a bad parody of a Bond villain agency. What would be much more believable, and better for your story, is a having a much more down to earth terrorist organization. Rather than committed to the grandiose campaign of world domination, it would be much more sensible for them to be furthering their own goals of gaining power and wealth. A much more down to earth group, relying on small infiltration, bribery, coercion, with operatives, rather than spartans and tanks, would be much more believable.
 * comments=