Forum:My newest Halo Comic

Ladies and gents, I present to you a little something I've been working on for around a month. Its a short Halo comic called Halo: One Man Mission (catchy and original, I know!) and it details a SPARTAN-II Class III sent on a suicide mission. Now I won't pretend it's got all sorts of fancy visuals and superb editing, but still, have a look, tell me what you think. This is my third halo comic, and my previous two have covered a ODST getting cut off from support and a fight between the arbiter and his half brother (guess who won). Also, based on feedback from several groups who have looked at my earlier comics, I've decided to show two versions: one with "sound effects" (aka, big red letters like BOOM, BANG, WHOOSH, and ASPLODE) and one without. Enjoy:

Sound Effects Version:

Non Sound Effects Version: