User talk:Baccus78/Nvoro 'Madar

This is a really good article Baccus, well done. However there are a few things, which may need changing. Firstly, there wouldn't be a bomb under the plate, maybe the table, but not a plate! That would be too platant. Also he got his eye and arm shmoed off but don't you think that he wouldv'e had severe injuries to his shoulder and that side of his face too? Maybe his leg aswell? But more importantly, he wouldn't have a prosthetic arm or an eye patch. The USR would clone his arm and eye and then successfully operate to restore them. There would also be no side effects of this due to teh USR's advance medicine and science. The reason why i say this is that in 2552, Humans can flash clone parts of bodies and successfuly put them in or on a human. This happens to Kelly in First Strike.

This means that the Covenant, who are a lot more advanced, would definately be able to do that. Also this is 50 years from the HCW, and if you think about todays standards, a hell of a lot can happen in 50 years to advance science or technology. At the moment, in real life, Humans have successfully grown an artificial living skin graph! This was done in 2007, and so in 600 years time, with a massively superior race, making an arm and eye would be the cheapest, quickest and easiest operation to do. I suggest you change it, because it will be amazing if you did. Apart from that, you've done a really good job, once again! Looking forward to seeing him in the Vespera RP! Regards,