User talk:Shadow-45/Spartan-G410 "Samantha"

There are several things you should fix as soon as possible so you don't run into nastier problems in the future. Since these are fairly minor problems, there shouldn't be any issues in fixing them. If you have any questions, don't be afraid to ask. ~ Hyper  Zergling  06:42, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Although this isn't too big of a deal, SPARTAN-III augmentation procedures do not cause growth. This can be easily seen with  and.
 * 2) Based on the year she was born, she would be part of the, so her tag would have the letter G in front of it. Also, 910 is far too high of a number.  I would not go very far beyond 400.
 * 3) I'm not sure if ONI agents would notice a poor family in any realistic way, but most SPARTAN-IIIs become SPARTAN-IIIs because their family gets killed by the Covenant. I suggest changing the cause of her conscription to the latter.
 * 4) I don't think SPARTANs get school grades.
 * 5) The time of her marriage should be after the Human-Covenant War, when/if you ever go into detail with that.