Talk:SPARTAN-X Program

Issues
I just hate to say anything that would be like saying this article's bad, because it's so long and well-written, but unfortunately, there are some issues here that may have to be dealt with.


 * 1) First and foremost, the article says that the Spartans first trained for five years, then got augmentations. But then they got an additional 10 years of training! That would be a lot of waste of time, since the UNSC would probably bring them in as quickly as possible, and I don't think that it would be neccessary either. Decreasing the years of extra training, or increasing the time they trained before augmentations, would be recommended.
 * 2) Secondly, the article says that Jake Hammer got Flamethrowers operated into his arms. That would be some torture for him, and wouldn't it render his arm quite useless, since they would probably have problem to move. Also, why would he need it, when he can just have a Shotgun in his hand.
 * 3) Thirdly, the fireteams in the article has 10 men per team, but Fireteams only have 4-5 men. A squad would be a better classification for the units. (This is not a real problem, though, it's just a note).
 * 4) Fourthly, and finally, there are multiple spelling errors all over the article.

It would be appreciated if you tried to fix these issues, though I'm not the one to decide. It's your article, and you do what you want to it. Cheers,