Talk:Authentica

Hi Sor! Now i don't mean to be harsh by putting the unrealism template up their but there are a few things, which are unrealistic about this article. If you could please read them and then discuss them further that would be great. Thanks;


 * 1) "Authenticas are a race of beings made entirely from flame and energy." - Now i believe that this is extremely unlikely. For a living being to live it would need vital components to make it live. However it is possible that a being could evolve past the stage of needing the body. However this kind of evolution and extreme knowledge to evolve in this way would only be associated with the Precursors or a higher technologically evolved specie. So i don't think this is at all possible.


 * 1) "The Authenticas live on, not a planet or moon, but a star." - This is impossible unless they were the above mentioned extreme race of energy beings. However they would need extremely technical suits or super heat resilliant hardware for them to live. I just can't see that happening. Our sun is about 9,000 degrees C, even though it varies, and so if its like that kind of temperature then it just won't happen.

So i'm sorry if you feel bad about it but it is fixable. I appreciate that it may be your first article so i will understand the curcomstances. So if we could fix this and make it more credible then the template will be lifted and you can carry on with this. No hard feelings! Regards,