Forum:My Halo Comic--tell me what you think

I just recently finished my Halo comic--it is my take on the history of the arbiter, and how he gained the rank of Supreme Commander, before he was exiled and turned into the arbiter that we know. Tell me what you think.

http://s220.photobucket.com/albums/dd150/Spartan501/Though%20you%20Leave%20this%20World/?start=all

Spartan 501 14:02, 24 April 2008 (UTC)