Talk:UNSC Jeremiah

Oh Boy
Alright, let's see. First, I would like to point out that you indicated this ship as being built in 2551 and having shield generators, 15 MAC guns, 30000 Archer Pods, 15 Shiva nukes, 15 FENRIS nukes, 30 plasma turrets, a length of 30000 meters, and that it participated in the Battle of new Mombossa.
 * By 2551, the UNSC had not developed shileding. By 2552, they were still messing with artificial gravity.
 * The most any ship thus far has had is three MACguns. Fifteen is rediculous.
 * 30000 Archer Pods!? That's absurd. Thus far, 30 is the most any one ship has had.
 * Fifteen Shiva nukes is...well, it isn't nearly as bad as some of the other claims, but five is much more reasonable.
 * Fifteen FENRIS nukes...I'd just like to point out that FENRIS aren't part of the normal ordnance and weren't used by the UNSC until 2552. But beyond that, my main problem is the number, which should be around five.
 * 30 plasma turrets? The only UNSC ship with anything similar is the Prowler, and I garuntee that a ship built in 2551 would not have plasma turrets at all.
 * You are suggesting this ship is as long as the Unyielding Hierophant, which is a massive Covenant battle station. The longest UNSC ship appears to be around a kilometer. Hell, the longest Covenant ship is only five kilometers, and here you say this ship is thirty kilometers long? Please!
 * The only ship involved in the Battle of New Mombossa directly was the In Amber Clad, and any other ships in the area would have been destroyed, had they been there.
 * --Master Gunnery Sergeant Hank J Wimbleton IV COM 23:31, 13 March 2007 (UTC)