User talk:Ebon Shadowshot/Heretic: Darkest Before Dawn

I'm intrigued, but there are some problems. To my understanding, the Flood are called the Flood because they are a Flood, they get one droplet, which cascades in to a Flood. They multiply extremely fast and eventually just crush their enemies under sheer mass. You might want to read The Vang: Military Form. It's where Bungie got the idea for the Flood. Besides some other grammatical errors and punctuation, I haven't seen anything yet so far that triggers an alarm in my head. Good work! --Maslab 08:29, 24 May 2009 (UTC)