Talk:Ronar 'Moram

Hey man, this is quite a large article isn't it. Anyway, here's my critiques on it.
 * 1) Can you please use the Template:Writer at the top, so we know who made this article. Also, for quotes please use the Quote Code (Type {Quote|What he says here|Who says it}, with double '{' on the ends). For links to halopedia, use Template:Halopedia
 * 2) I'm pretty sure Sangheili are born live, like mammals and humans, and not from eggs. Only Unggoy, Kig-Yar and Drones are laid from eggs.
 * 3) Majors aren't allowed Energy Swords, so are you talking about the ? If so then change it.
 * 4) Could you divide the paragraphs up? Its getting quite hard to read now.
 * 5) Covenant ground forces are 'Lances' and 'Legions', there are no 'Companies' and 'Battalions'. Legions are essentially several battalions joined together, and I think Lances are a couple of squads. Also, what rank is he, because Majors don't command Legions.
 * 6) What are Ruutians and T'vaoans? Are these different races of Sangheili? Please explain, because the way your wording is treating them like different species.
 * 7) Considering the size of a Supercarrier, why would he be given one? What did he do to be rewarded with one? Also I doubt a general would be able to command a supercarrier; considering that these are usually flagships like the, I don't think anyone below Supreme Commander or Fleetmaster would have one.
 * 8) Most Sangheili were strongly against any medical help during the war, so its weird that he would get one. If he didn't care, he'd be easily judged and harassed about it.

All in all, its a little inaccurate. Please fix this.