Talk:Barb spider

In all honesty, there is not too much technically wrong with this article. However though your spelling and grammar are not wrong per se, the style in which you have written it is, to put it bluntly, childish. Do not interpret this as flaming as it is merely constructive criticism. I would be happy to help improve the standard of your writing. There is a slight problem though, where you have written the family and species you have not put a realistic term. See | here and http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tarantula| Here] for a similar species for name ideas. -- Hello me   Meet the real me  19:56, January 31, 2012 (UTC)