User blog comment:The Pale Kestrl/Struggling writer looking for help./@comment-1044705-20130825211408/@comment-26194145-20130826210936

What's the name of this spartan your working on? Also it doesn't need to go into tons of detail, that's what stories are for and just write it. If we can understand what's going on and it has good grammar etc then it'll be fine.