User talk:ALONSO 3CRANEOS/Alonso-263

Sorry but theres a cronological incoherence in the article. You say he born in 2510, when he was 6 years old, his parents were killed by elites. How can that be possible? Human-Covenant War started in 2525. It was 2516 when he was 6 years. Then he entered to Spartan- III Project. More incoherence, the first Company of Spartan III (Alpha) was created in 2531, he would have 20 years approximately. Also some grammar mistakes.

201.153.95.16 23:06, August 24, 2011 (UTC)