Forum:Opinions on upcoming machinima teaser poster

Hello!

Now since you have probably read the title, I have resorted most of my attention from Halo Fanon to creating machinima. No this is not the machinima going to be featured on the machinima.com channel, they completely abused their account. I'm currently writing a series called Salvation Army, based on a group of elite SPARTAN-III supersoldiers protecting the agricultural planet of Heimdall V from Covenant invasion while ONI begins to discover an ancient artifact deep within the bowels of the planet. However the subject of the forum is community discussion on a teaser poster I just recently made. I ask for your utmost honest review on it and advice on how to improve it. Thank you.