Forum:Need some help with my gravemind poem

First I want to know if this poem sounds like the gravemind.

Swords will clash and spears will fly Angels reign and Demons die Fear the night and all it's hell No more secrets or lies to tell Nothing more will be concealed For soon all shall be revealed.

I also have a line from my story that im writing were its supposed to be the gravemind talking but im having trouble trying to make it rhyme.

“As I have foreseen, it shall come to pass.Come my child; walk with me while I explain what you must do next.”

Could someone edit it for me to help make sound more like a gravmind rhyme?

The story im writing is a BSG/Halo crossover were the gravemind is the Cylon god!

I have one more little rhyme that id like to know of it sounds good.

Go my children, rise and measure the temple of the five for that is were I shall soon abide.

PS. Please no new bsg bashing.