User talk:ProphetOfRegret/Captain Joshua Brown

Hi there, your page has canon issues that will need to be addressed as per the Halo Fan Fiction Wikia Canon Policy to remain in the 'mainspace' of the site. Issues are as follows:
 * 1) The exact course of the war was a tightly controlled secret throughout the war: he would not have heard of it out of the blue. Someone close to him would likely have to tell him, or he overheard something he shouldn't have. Enlisting wouldn't nessisarily be the logical solution to that either.
 * 2) He would have needed a commission or a battlefield commision - and a very good reason - to become an Officer.
 * 3) If he went to Halo, he's dead. Period.
 * 4) His recruitment into Section 3 is a bit illogical: their interest is for him to deal with experimental equipment because he survived something next to no one else survived?
 * 5) Citing a kind of PTSD is somewhat cliche, given Ghosts of Onyx does the same thing with Lucy, but at losing her entire Company. I don't think its quite the same watching millions of people you don't know die.

Please amend these points, thank you.

-Rainbow Dash http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/halo/images/8/8f/Rainbow_Dash.png (Talk) (Contribs) 03:34, May 23, 2013 (UTC)