User talk:JackJackson17/Jamie Salmon

Unrealistic
Hey, this is interesting... A clone of someone from the 21st century. Needless to say, this creates some problems, at least for me
 * 1) The way you've got presented it is as if the conscience is the same as the donor. Its unrealistic to say the clone is going be the exact same as the donor, as there are influences involved that would be almost impossible to replicate that would change its personality. If it is the same conscience, then can you explain why it is (Maybe its the same brain as the donor perhaps).
 * 2) Can you specify when the clone was born? Because I have no idea how long after the HCW he lived.
 * 3) Whats an 'AU'? At the moment I'm thinking 'Austronomical Unit', which is a form of measuring.
 * 4) Again, explain what the 'USC' is (unless this is a typo). Is it a rebel faction, the successor to the UNSC, or something else.
 * 5) No-one has even gone past the '15%' mark for brain usage, at least nobody I've heard of. Using all 100% is very unrealistic, so even bringing it down to the 50% or even 35% mark will still come across as being incredible (and thus still having the intended effect). Hell, even the Covenant haven't even been able to improve on that.

That said, I'm interested in this character. Clones haven't been mentioned much in Halo, and I'm eager to see how this will fold out. (Sev40 (talk) 07:22, August 26, 2015 (UTC))