User talk:SheWhoKnows/Palamok Wolf

I like the concept, picture, and links for this article. Articles that use an existing faction as a base while they expand upon it are a great way to flesh it out. One very minor thing that I did notice in both and the Bomba Bug article: it might be a good idea to restructure the paragraphs (I saw a little overuse of the word "they" as a sentence starter, made a few lines look a little redundant from a diction-centric perspective).