Talk:Saluër Republic

Not Canon Friendly

 * 1) You need to explain why a Government, which was formed before the conclusion of the Human-Forerunner wars, is still alive today. Judging by their reaction to their navy, the Forerunners would have assumed they were allied with the Humans and San-Shyuum, so as a result limited their expansion to their home system (the Government I mean).


 * 1) Lastly, the effect of the Halo Array would have destroyed all currently-living relatives, killing off the culture, language and their technology tier. For a now stone age-era people who believe fire is magic, trying to reconnect to their roots isn't really an option. For this reason, I recommend you divide it into the Pre-historic Saluër Republic and a modern variation.


 * 1) Being able to transform is all and well, but that still doesn't explain how the Covenant didn't come across their system, and with such a large military, it questions why the Covenant didn't absorb them into their empire, or even know of infiltrators in their ranks. Also, wouldn't they only be able to transform into something that's their exact mass?

The last one isn't a canon issue, but annoying to see 'oh they can transform, so that will stop any issues', like the Clawdites in Star Wars. Its unrealistic, or else they'll keep getting smaller and smaller by shedding off mass each time they turn into, say, a Grunt.

Sorry to come off as rude, I'm just pointing out the issues I've found in your article. (Sev40 (talk) 09:54, September 8, 2015 (UTC))