Talk:Remembering Noble

Very good story. I enjoyed reading it very much! However, I did come across this sentance while reading:"It was a massive thing, made of many statues." Maybe a bit more of a description there would be nice! Also, another thing to note would be that esspecially during the last few paragraphs of the story, the main character (Rebeka) was referred to as "she" excessively without actually saying her name. Of course I knew who it was, but a little more clarity as to who you were writing about would be great. Aside from that, this is a brilliant story! Good job and keep up the good quality work! =D