Talk:Grono 'Yendam

Good start to your first article on Halo Fanon! Welcome! I'm Distant Tide, I'm one of the newer users on Halo Fanon myself and one of the newest Site Patrollers. Nice to meet you. In the future, feel free to implement necessary or wanted Templates from the Category: Templates page. There is a wide selection, just make sure to check if there are any specific restrictions for using them.

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I have some concerns with some of your sub characters and the plots proposed in your article, such as the introduction of "Killer Chief" who is a bit of a one-note character it seems. Remember that trying to create ideologically opposites of other characters does that mean creating a character that says "Because X likes it, I don't like it."

The Master Chief is a much more complex character than what is let on and the Halo series under the tenure of 343 Industries alludes to that. Maybe consider rethinking some of the set up you have going forward. I know I've done a lot of 180s in my career as an amateur online-fanfiction writer.

Anyway, I really like what you've done so far - you've done a very good job with starting off. I want to say "Good Job" and keep up the good work. If you ever want to talk or hang out with the extended Halo Fanon community, you can usually find us in our Discord channel. Again, welcome to Halo Fanon and I hope you enjoy your stay. Feel free to browse and consider collaborating with other users. The community is big and the worlds we build even bigger! Hope to see you around! Distant Tide (talk) 01:09, January 8, 2018 (UTC)