Talk:Alexander Burn

Hi, Welcome to the site. I think your article is off to a good start, but there are a few realism issues. For one, a Marine would not be promoted to Lieutenant Colonel within three years of joining the UNSC Marine Corps, regardless of how talented of an officer he is. Also, it takes time for an officer to be trained, much longer than an enlisted soldier, so him being entirely trained and given an officer's commission in three months is unrealistic. Sorry if I sound like I'm coming off mean, but I'm just trying to be help your article be realistic. Besides this I think your article is pretty good so far, save a few grammatical/punctuation issues. Cpl Lucas96 (talk) 03:12, September 25, 2015 (UTC)