User talk:Actene/Archive 1

Welcome Actene
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Welcome
High im Eaite'Oodat you probably don't know me but im one of the old members here on halo fanon, in hopes of making you feel more welcome here at halo fanon i invite you to my RP

Hope you can participate.Eaite&#39;Oodat 21:05, 22 October 2008 (UTC)

For Reveille you can make a human, elite, Torians, or Endelusians, no other races participate in this sorry but your race the Hai may be able to participate in the second version of this RP.Eaite&#39;Oodat 21:15, 22 October 2008 (UTC)

I've got an idea for you to use the Hai! How about they fight with my Covenant Extremists? Therefore, we both get to develop our factions' histories! Hope you accept.

LieutenantDavies 17:04, 23 October 2008 (UTC)

Yep, that sounds cool. How about, the colony's called Nalious, The Hai attack it for its rich resources, the Extremist military quickly transfers a fleet to save the colony, and the Hai are driven back, then they come back, initiating a second battle of Nalious, where the Hai wins and strips the colony of everything of worth, does that sound good? We can develop it deeper further on if you want.

LieutenantDavies 11:06, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

Not more than a year, I think. When does the Hai invade the Milky Way, BTW? Oh, and an Extremist fleet has around 250 ships, and the colony has around 50 ships for defense, so the Hai should probably have a little more (I take it they're as advanced as the Covenant?). That prolly also means lots of combatants.

LieutenantDavies 11:35, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

The Extremists did extensive research on how to improve their technology, and have managed to increase the power of their shipboard weaponry a little (around 4% or something, they aren't as clever as Cortana after all). However, I'm sorry to say that the time doesn't really match well. During the years after Halo 3, the Extremists have barely even established their first territories, let alone established multiple fleets. There may be a way around this though, let's just hope that we're capable of that. How about this instead: The Hai attack in 2554 Nalious as planned, but wins the first battle (there would be little resistance), and starts to strip it of everything of worth, then the entire current Extremist military shows up and drives away the Hai, and shortly after that, the Hai suffer from defeats from other fronts and are eventually pushed back by the Elites, how about that, can it work that way?

LieutenantDavies 11:57, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

Sounds good to me. So, can I start writing on it on the Extremist page?

LieutenantDavies 12:24, 24 October 2008 (UTC)

A battle page would be good. I would have done it myself, but I've been occupied lately, sry. Hope you can do it though.

LieutenantDavies 08:05, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Milky Way War Era
Hi again. Sorry if I'm pressing you too hard (you seem to have lots of things planned). Nonetheless, I'll approach you with a question: Would you like to add the Hai to the Milky Way War as one of the factions? If you want to, I'd like it the most if the Hai could ally themselves with the Covenant Remnant (they need some help), and I've got some good ideas on how to develop that. It's up to you though. If you've got questions, the info's on the page, and what you can't find, ask me then.

LieutenantDavies 21:47, 5 November 2008 (UTC)

Go to the page: here, and then add the Hai under "Fanatics" in the "Factions" section, preferrably under the Covvie Remnant, and also: I'd prefer if the species pages have their faction names appear on the page instead of the species name. But don't worry, when I think over it, I'll just go ahead and add them myself (to save us time). Thanks for your cooperation!

LieutenantDavies 14:45, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Oh and as for how the Hai and Remmies are gonna work together, I thought it would be a combination of sorts: Firstly, the Remmies offer the Alliance of Tribes lots of territory, in exchange for their cooperation (the Covvies are after the eradication of humanity, not capturing territories, so that should work fine). Secondly, the Remmies also brings up lots of money to hire most of the freelancer Hai Mercs which are then assigned to Remmie Fleets to give the infantry some extra punch. Further, I hoped that the Alliance of Tribes could be the ones attacking the Sangheili territories, while the Remmies attacks the humans. We'll develop this furthermore later if you're interested.

LieutenantDavies 14:57, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Agent 2994
Go ahead and add him, I don't mind at all. Good luck with Reveille! Cheers,

I've come up with a basic story plot for Agent 2994 and SPARTAN-141's meeting;


 * HPA is one of the many secretive projects created by the Office of Naval Intelligence. Utilising canidates originaly planned for the SPARTAN-III Project, they carry out assasinations and other covert ops under total secresy and with no remorse. They are killers to the bone, with no limitations on how to conduct their buisness. However, when one of those missions intercepts an operation conducted by the UNSCDF-MC SPARTAN-141, sparks fly as the lead agent and the enigmatic SPARTAN-II clash.


 * A UNSC officer, tired of his grunt work during the reconstruction of UNSC assets in the wake of the Great War, creates distrust among his underlings as he plans to extrdite himself from his lowly position. What he dosen't know is that his actions have deadly consequenses for a squad of Marines trapped behind enemy lines, fighting for their survival from a reinvigorated Covenant...and a past ememy throught long gone...

Like it?

I just added that in there for the hell of it. It's another storyline i'm concidering for an upcoming RP. As for my userpage, I have a SIPALS(Selective I P Address Lock System) so that certain undesireable IP users can't mess with my stuff. Just refresh the page if it locks you out, but i recommend reading the notes on the bottom if you get locked out more than twice. It's still tempermental.

I say co-write a story. That way we can post our own chapters whenever we get ideas. What should we call it then?

I say we call it Halo: Ultimatum. I dunno why, but it sounds cool. XD

Can I use one of your agents for my newest story? Maybe it could be a new one,so you make the background and I'll tell you what weapons he uses. Just asking in case you dont want to do it.

Fanon
Ive been reading some of your Works and there really good and i was wondering if u would want to right a fanon together?

Regards

hmmm do u have any units based in Necros Era? Cos i have the 101st Orbital Shock Regiment and if you want i could say two of there companys were fighting rebels. U gimme some ideas

Regards

You want use Lima Company from my Guys? cos if this is set in 2610 Knife are busy (on loan to Arby2679 I think thats his name) Just to save ya the hassle but if you wanna create one fine

Warm Regards

Lima Company is a company in my regiment The 101st Orbital Shock Regiment click on the link there and then lemme know what u want to call this Fanon

Warm Regards

Sounds Perfect. How long before Kanna? year or 2-3 months?

and heres the officer Layout for Lima Company

Captain.Ford(CO)

Lt.Garry (1st Platoon CO)

2nd Lt.Peterson (2nd Platoon CO)

Lt.Anderson (3rd Platoon CO)

Each Platoon has 4 squads you can make there names up

Regards

Ok Which planet should we go for? and some of are guys have to die and for the next Necros R.P you can use Lima If you want. The ship where attached to is UNSC Ballymena Lemme know when i should Create the page

Warms Regards and Good Hunting

Ok Compton III (i made up) 2nd Battalion of the 101st Orbital Shock Regiment Defend planets so how about Delta Company gets overran except for 1 or 2 squads. Is that ok?

Regards

u got your squads ready? Cuz im gonna post this. Btw im using Julliet Company.

Good Hunting.

Ok theres part of the First Chapter done Halo: Hard Drop oh and u dont need to make the squads just go to my regiments page and post on the talk page what there names and ranks are

Regards

Quick comment on my regiments talk page but the name of the companies for ur guys because we'll both be playing as Delta Company and you Lima Company and me Julliet

Regards

I saw it it's very good. OK story so far the boys on the ground at the moment are Delta Company Julliet and Lima havent arrived in system yet and they will OD down

Hope This Helps,Regards

OK is your Lt Guy a Squad Leader or is he the company XO? (XO means Executive officer)

Regards

What did you mean tell you how to add to my regiment page?

Regards

Quick question do you want to use Lima Company for future Necros RPS? Cos i have 1st and 2nd battlion and Julliet Company

Regards

Yep that would be fine but please let me know if your gonna edit them in some way.

Regards

I put part of my next post up check it out if u want and add some more if you want

Good Hunting

Can you help me
I would like if you could make it. I can just fill in the crucial stuff,like name,weapons,personality,the works. Then we can put the double ownership template on it. I would like it to be named Agent 2996.

I could start work on it now. I am not sure were to find grey MJOLNIR pics though,so I guess thats your job. He is in my story Halo:Disappearing Factions. That will be his main mission. Hopefully he will get backup,as it will get messy,and he will almost certainly get killed,as thats what ONI thinks.

I have started work on the page,mind helping out with the training part after I do his early life?

I wrote his early life section,although I am not sure if the Agents get augmented or not,so you may need to change that part.

Thanks dude,btw what weapons do the Agents regularly use. I put some weapons he uses in Halo:Disappearing Factions,but I am not sure if he is allowed to use any weapon he wants.

Can you pease write his training section,so I can continue work on the article.

He is very interested in war and violence,as shown when 2 other Agents got in a fight,he grabbed both of them(he is large and strong) and beat then almost to death,just so he could concentrate on reading a book about World War II. He is also very quiet,as he only talks when spoken to or if he needs something.

I love how you take something simple (like 2 guys getting beat up) and make it into something interesting and magnificent. Is it possible maybe him and 2994 can become acquanitances,like maybe going on a mission with each other once or something?

Dont make him sound like an idiot. Just call him a psycho like you did on his page. Can you please read it to see if it is okay. I have made quite a few edits.

Thanks
Thanks!!! I will add something about his intelligence,and about that quote it was based off of Avery Johnson when he said,"Sorry Guns,thats classified." in Halo 2.

No,not really. However if I dont like them they might be slightly changed.

What do you mean,see him in action. Do you mean explain how he fights?

Well,so far he is only in 1 of my stories,Halo:Disappearing Factions. Feel bad for the United Rebel Front,as they effectively get eliminated in this later on in the story. Itis so far unfinished.

Rager XII is a small colony near what was Harvest that has had a very fractured government ever since it's inseption. A small coup has frightened many of the citizens into beliving that the UNSC won't do anything to save them. However, the UNSCDF-MC needs this coup stopped because they have a colony ship en route with a Division of Marines for protection. They fear that the rebels will attempt to posses the ship to make a getaway. The UNSCDF-MC orders 141 to asses the situation and do what is nessecary for those Marines to get to their destination safely. I was wondering if 2994 could be sent here, by HPA, to kill the ringleader of this coup. Thereby, doing so he interferes with 141's mission and the have their scuffle.

Battle of Nalious
Nice, great! Though the Extremists wouldn't use nuclear weapons, but rather glassing, to eradicate the Hai ground forces, as nuclear weaponry is outdated in the Covenant. Other than that, everything sounds great. I'm going to get some new stuff up on the Milky Way War Era soon, so look sharp!

LieutenantDavies 18:47, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Nicely written!

LieutenantDavies 19:16, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

2996
What else should I put on 2996's page? I am mainly basing it off of 2994's,but I still need help.

If you have photoshop,have him holding a barbers knife. If not,any weapn you want,except the MA5K,as he doesnt like it.

Thats ok. Is it okay if he gets in a fight with 2994 or 2995? He is quite violent,and small things set him off. Maybe someone could tell him about 2994 calling him dumb or something like that.

That would work. I'll start writing how the altercation began on 2996's page,and you could base 2994' off of his.

I'll write it now and you could see how it happened and put it in 2994's point of view.

Check it out and see if you like it. They both get hurt pretty bad,and then they get subdued by 2995,who didnt kill 2994 because he saved her life that one time.

Can you do it for me? Remember its our article,and you happen to make things sound better when you write. Can 2995 at least approve of 2996's actions,since she still is against 2994,as she didnt get rescued yet? It would add some zing to his relationshps with others,and may set him up for more co-op missions,possibly with 2995.

OK dude. I'll check it out and see if it works. Then I'll get back to work on his story,which you can keep tabs on here Halo:Disappearing Factions

NETI Doomsday
Yes, Doomsday is just a fancy name, it's a normal air-to-air missile, nothing like a planet killer or anything like that!

Warm Regards

Welcome to Grey
that's fantastic to hear! well here's what you'll need to do

1. There are 2 squads left, Squad Silver and Squad Slate for you to choose from. Simply click on the link and you can create the article, feel free to copy and paste my Squad Charcoal info to use as a template.

2. Yes you can choose and create your own spartans however just please avoid overly, independent, gungho type figures, something i need to work on myself >.<. Also make sure your spartans dont have the same ID Tags any others, since you'll be in Bravo Company your tags should look something like SPARTAN-B172. You will be able to completely control your squad and i wont interfer...completely there will probably be future missions where i would like for you to do certain things etc.

3. Unfortunately there is one limit i have to give you, that the your squad can only have fire or assault teams as i have taken the platoons specialized squad (for more information check here SPARTAN-IV Program (Ajax 013)) so that means you can have either 2 assault teams and 1 fire team or vice versa.

that's all i can think of for now, if you have any other questions or would like some help feel free to ask and i'll see what i can do.

Welcome To Grey Hollywood

yeah dont worry about the images, i did that for my own personal flavor and to help me when im writing about their personalities and such.

Hollywood

UG Invite
Have fun,and go by the rules!

Grey
I believe that the squad leader goes within one of the teams but i could be wrong and would be best to ask Ajax. as for mentioning my spartans go ahead i'll probably be doing the same later on. do you know if you'll be taking slate or silver squad?

Hollywood

alrighty, dont worry about creating the article in a rush, better to wait with a good article than to rush a bad one we have plenty of time for Wardog. when it is complete please let me know.

Hollywood

hey just read about Silver and everything looks pretty good, looking forward to seeing their individual SPARTANs, i'll add silver to grey platoon soon

Hollywood

MWWE Battles
Sure, there's a lot of battles you could write. But foremost, I'd like you to do a Battle around the Sangheili colony Silent Executor, where the Alliance of Tribes makes a new offensive into Sangheili territory after having been pushed back the earlier year(s), and the Hai will win thanks to outnumbering the Sangheili defenders but also due to their fierce fighting, so I think you'll enjoy this one. The fate of the colony is up to you, you can either have the Hai use it as a base of operations for the continued offense, completely plunder and destroy it and take the population as slaves, or you could just destroy it, or a mix of several of the options. When you've written it, I'll add it to the timeline. Do you like this?

LieutenantDavies 12:09, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

Silver
i skimmed through your spartans and i see no faults so thumbs up d('-'d) Hollywood

SPARTAN-IVs
Now you have that sorted, any problems, ask me or Hollywood.

Silent Executor
Don't worry, it's ok, I haven't been that active either lately. BTW, the battle was very well written, good job! Keep it up,

LieutenantDavies 08:49, 29 November 2008 (UTC)

Federation of Free and Allied Races
Dear ,

The Milky Way War has been repurposed into merely being a prolouge to my next big project. And a new faction, the Federation of Free and Allied Races, is a major part in that. It consists of the Republic of Sagittarius Arm Races (better known as the New Covenant, it's the union of the reformed Covenant Remnant and the Covenant Extremist Republic), the Meritocracy of Sangheili Republics (the Sangheili, Hunters and grunts), and the United Earth Government as of now. However, I also wondered if you would like to have your race(s)/faction(s) in the Milky Way War to join this Federation as well, which will secure it a place in my next project. Please consider this, and tell me yes or no. Thanks,

LieutenantDavies 10:46, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

I see. I'll work the plot accordingly, shouldn't be too hard :)

LieutenantDavies 12:49, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Halo: Hard Drop
1st Chapters done post your thing. You can start the battle but remember this Lima is to flank behind the rebels and keep 'em busy while juliet comes and trys to rescue the trapped ODSTs.

Good Luck and Good Hunting : P

Ultimatum
141 has the backing of the UNSCDF-MC at this time, so I think it'd be difficult for him to be arrested on any charge, bar something like 2994's slaughter. I am still trying to figure out what 141 will do or say about the conflict at the station. I want him to be late to knowing about it so he's kind of angry about it, but then he's got that stone-cold anti-emotion barrier of SPARTAN training that pushes it away, in order for the mission to go on. I too, am thinking about 141 and 2994's encounter, and I have an idea that, when the UNSC Hawaii, carrying the Marine reinforcements, arrives, Griffon's men attempt to take it over, as suspected and both 2994 and 141 go there to stop it, for their respective reasons, and that, they could see each other. 2994 has the no-witnesses directive, so he hunts down 141 and they have a small skirmish before Griffon calls both of them and challenges them to find and kill him. So, the second encounter is set up therefore...but that's for later in the story. Tell me what you think and what any other ideas you have.

I like that much better. We'll do that, and i'll contact you with what i'll input to 141's side of the battle. So, with 19 hours left till the Hawaii arrives, shall we dig deeper into how Griffon got ahold of Rager XII's gov't and some of the lesser charcters[read: NOT 141 or 2994]'s histories?

That's a ONI Cover Ops agent, who's attempting to fish out Griffon's history and why he's done this. Kinda left it open to the backstory of Griffon coming out, if we're going to explore the other characters histories.

Very good. This should be fun. :)

I have an idea for the big confrontation; 2994 get's close to Griffon, almost to the point of meeting him, when he puts his plan to capture the Hawaii in motion. When the Marines are fighting Griffon's men, Captain Jackson can attempt to save 141 and 2994 by daring to kill Griffon himself. He screws up and almost gets 141 and 2994 killed. The ship reverses course and the two of them kill Griffon, and etc. Sound good?

Nexus
Fear my Nexus as they shall kill your Hai mwhahahahahahah

Lol there in MWWE and there evil hehe

Regards

well my Barren-Class Crusier Shall strip your planets of oxygen!

MWHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA

Fear Me :P

I'll just disable your ships and send the marines on board :P and if that doesnt work ill just send two ships to jump into your minst and blow up destryoing your fleet then take away the oxygen. :P

If the marines get overran they just blow themselves up aswell disabling the ship they boarded lol

Regards

They aren't like conventional marines (UNSC for example) the Marines will only bored a hip if there captain deems it worthy to be boarded so they create a hole about 5-10 marines swarm in and try to capture the ship if they realize that the mission is impossible they will self-destruct there enlighteners either destroying/disabling the ship as the punishment for failiure is death. Same goes with the navy. Though my army will kick your ground troops assess


 * P

Happy Death hehe

Damn cos it isnt till my guys turn 16 before they become "True Nexus" but my guys are willing to die if there gonna be overran the space forces will literally suck out the atmosphere with there troops on it just to win and then reterraform and make it a new colony :D

MWHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Regards

If the Hai boarded one of my ships they wouldn't get far the ship captain would simply blow the ship up lol. but have fun trying to get onto the Purifier-Class Dreadnought that is a beast of a ship. O and quick question you wanna start a story where the Nexus first encouter a species of the FFAR? it being the Hai?

(This is fun)

Hehe

Regards

Ok fair enough do you want to create a battle page like we write it from the Nexus and Hai side?

Regards

OK you create it (Davies has allowed nexus in) as im currently editing Nexus (I have two Halo Fanon Tabs up)

The Nexus dont tend to leave there territory so you would have to say a small Hai fleet entered Nexus territory which the Nexus consider an act of agression.

The system can be System 3 Alpha or something similar (Thats the way the Nexus call there system but the Hai may name it differently.

Lemme kno if thats ok.

Regards

Sounds good and Davies has let them in check his and my talk. You willing to start the page?

Regards

Agent 2995
Dear Actene,

Artemis Fowl much? :P Good pictures haha

Regards,

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 19:28, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

Hello
Hey thanks for complimenting on the 26th Beta Battalion Squad. Finally someone other than my friends compliments on my work.

I love those trailers also, the end of the article was sort of hard. I was trying to find good pictures of the two guys getting shot in the announcement trailer, especially Andy's death.

Battle of System Alpha 3
There it is Started just edit and say what the Hai call the System Alpha 3

Good Hunting

You very busy?

Very good my friend! I have added the Nexus' Side and the Nexus Aftermath all that is left is for you to add the Hai aftermath.

The Nexus government has declared war on the Hai.

hehehehe

That sounds alot better than one person winning. But do you mind if we destroy a few planets? and or both/one of us manage to get to the home planet?

Regards

Oh forgot to mention add ur aftermath to the battle of alpha 3

Writing
No worries, dude! Your writing is very good, and I don't see anyway that I could improve it. Just keep doin' what your doin!

I saw you use Imperial craft for the Hai.
I found a website you might be interested in. Has all sorts of Imperial starcraft, its http://wolfsshipyard.mystarship.com//.

No problem, and when you upload I guess just put the name of the author in the summary on the Upload screen. Im actually using the Battlestar Galactica ships as mine.

RE:Hai-Nexus War
Sounds good.

So you want me or you to create a battle page then tell you what it is?

Regards

Ok sounds good BTW do you live in America?

Regards

Cos i live in Europe (Ireland to be exact) so it'll be hard to be on at the same time..

Regards

P.S i suggest you start the first battle of the Hai-Nexus War :P

Ultimatum
I'd like to borrow Lieutenant Charles Goodwin for one of my next posts. I have an plot movement revolving around that S-141 meets with Goodwin, now the ranking police officer, and questions him as to the extent of Griffon's regime and his own personal reasons for suspecting the police force(as explained in the Gang vs. 141 post). 2994 sees him do so, and wonders why a SPARTAN is here. He then follows 141 and attempts to question his motives and they skirmish(still planning that part). Etc, etc.

It's funny; i'm sick as a dog today, yet my brain has been going since 0300 hours this morning. XD

Cassandra-G006 — Lovely job!
Dear Actene,

A job well done with the Cassandra-G006; I am a particular advocate of the idea that not every SPARTAN is some of god, and I like your character development. Good concept and article, keep it up. :)

Regards,

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 14:10, 9 December 2008 (UTC)

RE: Grave
Yeah, i'm planning how 2994 and 141 will meet for the fight, but i think we, together, should coreograph it. That way neither of us can simply take advantage of the other(not that I suspect you'd do that, but i'd rather do it this way so it's also more intense). I'll refrence some of their dealings in my next 141 post, but i'm still having 141 revile about his last mission before his reawakening. To everyone but those who were involved in the original project to develop it, it is //CLASSIFIED//. Colton Jackson will have done something on Rager XII that leads to his attempt to redeem himself during TGL. Unfortunatly, that's all I have planned of it. >_< When I have more, i'll let you know.

Well, right now, i'm writing a new post on TGL and I have it in there that 2994 cut up a bit of 141's side with a knife. I think it would be interesting if 2994 puts the pistol to 141's head, then, when 141 turns around and see's it, 2994 sees Agent 2789's face instead. It persuades him to let go of his hate for everyone not like him, or something like that. I dunno. :-8 If you can, get on #halo-fanon on teh IRC ASAP and we can talk about it more.

T_T Well, what about here?

Re Silver
don't worry about it no real rush at the moment since Vespera is fairly dead. as for personalities a couple i could suggest are, quiet-shy, loner, loud-outgoing, hot tempered, very friendly, or just plain "normal" with maybe a few quirks like fears etc. Hollywood

Hai-Nexus War
Check that link out. 4000 Nexus Creds is about 2,500 UNSC Creds. And for the battles i think you should start it as i have taken the lead for far :P

Happy Hunting

It's a good Article so it is the Shredder, :)

Well Nexus Ships are made at about 1 battlegroup every 15 hours so they would always be able to put larger Battlegroup in each system of about 15 per group or more.

Hope This Helps ;)

The Fight
Meet me here if you can, ASAP.

Chat
Well, a recent family emergency(see my userpage) caused me to quit and to halt my post. I probably won't get back to it untill Sunday, maybe Tuesday, if things go slow.

Nexus Ships
I dont mind if the Nexus take more K.I.As but i dont want it like Nexus 16 and Hai 3

Hai in next project
First off, the things you've done to the Hai are good, thumbs up. Secondly, they may not ally with the main villain, but before the main villain shows up, there's going to be a conflict between the FFAR and the newly restored Endelusian Empire. How about the Hai ally with the Second Endelusian Empire? That will mean that the Hai will get to battle the Sangheili (again, seems they're destined to be enemies xD), or alternatively, the Covenant Republic, or both, depending on what you want. But the best for the project would be if the Hai could take on both the MSR and the CR, unless I can get ODST Joshie to have the Nexus ally with the Endelusian Empire as well. I'll ask him about it right away. I'll maybe not be active much today, but I think I may have a chance at the computer later in the evening. Thanks for your cooperation :)

LieutenantDavies 09:26, 13 December 2008 (UTC)

RE:War
I think there sound be a 3rd Battle of the system where its recaptured by the Nexus then the Nexus launch an assault on Hai territory and press forward into a diff colony but is driven back and give up and declare they won.

That OK?

Don't worry, my friend, I'll try and make sure that the Hai aren't entirely defeated. I'll just see what I can do.

LieutenantDavies 15:07, 13 December 2008 (UTC)

Sure that sounds ok for the Nexus and Hai.

As for the SPARTANs could you tell me what company your boys are in?

My Guys are E Company which is 2nd Battalion so it'll be tough to link up but sure if it happens it happens.

Anyway Will u help me get Pics for my Guns? cos i have alotta Nexus Stuff to make :/

Regards

Guns from futuristic games like Battlefield 2142.

Your Help is much appreciated mate :)

Warm Regards

Thanks alot if you need any help let me know so i can repay the favor :)

Top Gear
Just to let you know Top Gear is a British Car reviewing show and those pic for the Fiesta-Class Beach Assault Craft are from the latest episode (Last Sundays)

Just thought to let you know

Regards

Pics
Thank you very much.

Is there anyway i can repay the Favor?

As a matter of fact there is... I need some pictures for my Hai ground forces. I have them using stolen vehicles for the most part, but I was wondering if you could find some vehicles that look like the Hai would use them. Also, could you get me some artillery pics?



That pic ok? ill be back in 10 mins as i need shower.

cya soon

RE: Fixes
Dear Actene,

Of course; that'd be great. However be very careful to note in the edit summary exactly that you're just performing a housekeeping cleanup and aren't trying to change the votes. :) Keep it up.

Keep in touch,

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 17:11, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

G294
How about some disgruntled ONI Biological Assets? Used by ONI for anything and everything they wanted to, after 141's little bout with Kelmond they were disbanded, and not repaid in any way. They hate ONI for using them and never giving them any condolances or compensation for effectivly ruining their lives, and after discovering Simon's hate for ONI, they allow him to join their crew of renegades who are(like ARES) collecting info to make the UNSC investigate ONI.

Zulu Waa
Oh, good point! Oh, and thanks or whatever you meant by interesting.-

No, ONI Biological Assets are simply people in the UNSCDF that the ONI Director picks to use as his own personal arms and legs in the rest of the UNSC. They're more like Super-Duper-OMG-Deep-Cover-So-Classified-If-You-Met-Them-They'd-Kill-You-Your-Family-Your-Friends-And-Their-Family-And-Friends ONI agents than test subjects.

Why thank you!-

RE:G294
I think that you should have like a secret ONI Assassin Squad which saves him.

Hope this Helps

Regards

Invitation
Hello! I invite you to read: The Epic of Barbartus. I'm trying to find random users to give me feedback. Your contribution would be appreciated.

Meat  & Taters... 01:31, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Comments
The comment is posted. I must say, well done! I haven't read something that good here in a while! I actually couldn't find anything bad about the story. Is it nominated for any awards? If not, I think I might nominate it myself. I'll check.

Meat  & Taters... 02:24, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Voting
I found your article on the nominations page. I voted for it, it deserves an award. So check out what I had to say when you get the chance.

Also, The Epic of Barbartus is a candidate for covenant character of the year. Hope it does well...

I'll have to look into those grammar errors.

Meat  & Taters... 02:47, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

RE: Sarathos
Sure!

-Legends May Die, Heroes May Fall,  But We,  Shall Conquer

Response
I was looking for AI articles and I must say, nice job on Diana. I'll leave a comment when I'm done here.

As for stories, I'm surprised that people like The Epic of Barbartus so much. It's some noob's first article and most others on the site tower over it. It's nice to see that you enjoyed it so much! As for another article, you caught me at just the right time! I am planning to make a story about a grunt character and the plot theme is going well. I haven't started it here yet. I still have to find a name for him though; but I can guarantee that you'll be the first person to know when it arrives!

Meat  & Taters... 03:08, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Good Luck!
Good luck finishing Simon, I also saw Jake-G293, it seems promising! Also many of the people I "marketed" to were guys I knew from Gruntipedia. It has a nice community, you should check it out sometime!

lol, I feel undeserving of my only article's success now...

Meat  & Taters... 03:30, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Gruntipedia Fanon
By the way, I have like 3 hilarious fanon articles on gruntipedia. Prophet of Haters, Meat and Taters (not my name, characters I made), and THE BEAST! I love these articles, too bad I can't use them here, I make much better comedies than storys.

Meat  & Taters... 03:42, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Answer
What Sgt.johnson means by "uptight" is: sophisticated or extremely organized, or prideful.

Meat  & Taters... 04:08, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

New Article
Meat and Taters here, though I figure you don't care too much, as I promised you are the first person to know about my new article.

Link: Jaren Empetee.

It will take a while to complete though.

Meat  & Taters... 18:47, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Complete
Jaren Empetee is finished! I think it's my best yet! Tell me what you think.

Meat  & Taters... 22:31, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Prologue
I saw that prologue. It was kind of ridiculous. The article was pretty interesting though, it had a nice bit of suspense in it. I think it should be merged with Simon G24 in order to improve it even further.

About the comments though, I did think about that long and hard after I saved it earlier today and I considered purposeful destruction as activation, you do make sense though.

Meat  & Taters... 03:12, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Correction
I didn't mean the article was ridiculous, I meant the talk was ridiculous. Though there was only one problem and Donut pointed it out already: the human fleets should be at earth as Lord Hood said.

Meat  & Taters... 03:21, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

Words
"Sometimes common sense must be abandoned to create epic fiction."

Wise words Actene! I think some people here should think more along these lines you have imposed. Keep it up!

Meat  & Taters... 03:31, 20 December 2008 (UTC)

RE: Ultimatum
Yeah, all the stuff regarding my step-grandfather's funeral is done, so i'm more active. Plus, it's X-Mas Break for the next 3 weeks, so i'm hoping we can get alot more done with Ultimatum. I'm having a bit of trouble working out the Interrigation of goodwin, and i'd like some help. So far, 141 has gained knowledge of the RCPD's involvement in Griffon's rise to power and the "situation" imposed by him. However, it's going nowhere after that. Any ideas?

Great to know that our story will be epicz!

TOFF
Are you gonna use Team Jian for your guys?

Im making up a team called Team Wolf :)

But i aint makin it as that team is for my two S-IIIs in Necros

Regards

Ok
To the HN War sounds good and to the training thing also sounds good :)

My Guys are Team Wolf. They are

SPARTAN-G024 (Joshua)

SPARTAN-G094 (Amy)

SPARTAN-G173 (Maria)

SPARTAN-G092 (Colin)

The Ones which you can click are in Necros. Other two are KIA at the time of Necros.

Regards

P.S You want me to write my bit for it?

Sure that sound ok mate.

Looks good lemme know when your gonna ad my Guys in.

Damn your a good writer. You Pretty muched sumed the Nexus up! Anyway I agree but i think maybe we should do an RP Off the Hai-Nexus War.

What ya say?

Yes, Josh is Detached and can be Cold but is a good leader. Amy is Fun and Lively Maria is a little quiet but knows how to some up an ironic situation. And Colin loves explosions xD

ok well then SPARTAN-G143 Andrew Is quiet and is the sniper

New War Offense Plan
Hi, it was some time since we talked. It's about the new project (you may have guessed :P). I've decided how the attack pattern will be, so listen (or read, whatever):


 * Endelusians attack The Deva Alliance and the Torian Monarchy.
 * Verok attack the UNSC (and its protectorates, the Forerunner Council and Vacusian Alliance) and the Agnostos Empire.
 * Alliance of Tribes attack the Meritocracy of Sangheili States (including their protectorates).
 * Nexus attack Covenant Republic (if possible, could they get a small Hai fleet as backup? Cause the Covenant Republic is currently a superpower, together with the Sangheili).

Hope you like this new information :P

LieutenantDavies 13:58, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Nice ship :)

LieutenantDavies 14:34, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Easier Way to Talk
To Mr.Actene xD

I was wondering if you had Xfire and/or Msn so we can communicate alot easier.

If not thats cool

Ciao

Yes you posted right.

Anyway, Regard Davies' attack plan i said that The Hai Fleet are used as a distraction for the Nexus.

Im gonna Start the Battle of Natulla now and it's a Nexus Victory then a thrid battle of SA3 then my people lanuch an assualt on your territory then the war ends etc etc. That ok?

How Epic we Talking?

Just ta let you know the Nexus Army is extremely Barbaric so you Fucked! heheeheh (Pardon my French)

Ok the battle is up Post your Force' so i know what im up against and then i can begin to start the battle (Just to let you Know my best Regiment is down there! HAHAH!)

Resistence is Futile

Enlightening is Near., Beg for Mercy!!

OK i work on that ASAP but atm im busy fixing up the Nexus Weapons etc i suggest you do the same cos well we can xD

Ha Good Luck! The Nexus tend to blow everything to Shit if forced to retreat.

Anyway you want me to get you anymore pics as you got me like 10+

Feel Free to do the Same with the Nexus.

Harp Drop
Btw You gonna add another post to Hard Drop cos i wanna get it done

Sorry i dont mean to pressure you its only if you have spare time.

That Old, Familiar Feeling Brute Commander
Would you like to be commander of the Loyalist forces in TOFF? Ciao,

You can have any other characters you want. Being commander of the Brute Forces means that you should make the leader of the Brute Fleet, then you're free to direct those forces as you wish (as long as it makes sense, like, the Loyalists wont glass Halo, and don't have them leave, plz) through your RP posts. For example, I have 7 Submissive Brilliance as a character, and he's the leader of the Forerunner Forces in the RP, which makes me the commander of the Forerunner Constructs. If you have more questions, feel free to ask. Ciao,

Just a note about being commander of the brute forces, there are two leaders already. The Prophet of Redemption and Thantarus, so you need to make the third and final one. Also, your gonna have to refer back to me about what the brutes are gonna do, so it lines up with the other factions. Thanks,

S-III Story
Wow you pretty much nailed Joshua, :P

Keep it up dude it's a very engrossing read.

Warm Regards

Just wondering if (i know we discussed it) i could make on or two posts on S-III Story so i can give you a better idea of Josh's personality.

I'm trying to finish the post up soon. I hope to have it done at least by Saturday.

Merry Christmas
OK thanks

BTW

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Merry Christmas!

I also hope the Same

but today is a dat of Rest and so no editing for me :P

Just relaxing with mah new PC Games :)

Warm Regards

Merry Christmas!

Christmas Story
Hey, Meat and Taters here. I finished my Christmas story: Tidar 'Berthamee and Deedop. Tell me what you think on it's talk page.

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

Meat  & Taters... 20:16, 25 December 2008 (UTC)

S-III
No Just put me down as a guest writer in Notes as you are doing all the work.

To Simon's religion I'm Catholic and i didn't take any offense what so ever because he changed religion.

Hope this Helps

Sure you dont need my permission mate.

Regards

p.s ill get on the S-III Story ASAP. Sorry for the late response was on BF2142 :P

You have xbox live?

hmmmmm???

I'll Start work on S-III at 5Pm (GMT.

I'm sorry man, but I just can't think of anything for 141/Goodwin interview. Writers block FTL. If you could terribly mind putting up another section of Chapter 4 in lieu of my failing, i'd appreciate it. Maybe after all this damned Christmas/New year stuff is over, i'll be able to think again.

Answers
All Nexus Citizens are ex-amry Marine Pesonell and would defend there towns feriously but you could say they take a small town cos the big ones have a large garrison.

The Nexus' Ground troops at the present (No Reinforcements) would be about 11,000-12,500.

That thing on 2995's page is just a thing to let people know that you don't have time to write about her At the Moment, but by saying that it hasn't been declassified.

The Xbox Live Thing, ok mate my bro uses' more than me anyway.

For the S-III Story I will Write one or Two things I'll let you know at a later Stage.

Cheers

MWWE additions
Things have been added to the Milky Way War Era, and a lot of it concerns the Hai, so you may be interested in reading it so that you can add it to the Hai's page. Tell me if you're disappointed about any of the things.

LieutenantDavies 16:46, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

All sounds good mate.

We should keep the number of Superhumans at a minimum, so i'd suggest the Goodwin idea.

Armor. He wants to be imposing, so Goodwin will cooperate better.

RE: TOFF
Well, the other brute is mine, but you may have the prophet. However, I may need to use the prophet for other reasons, but only at certain times.

No, you can go on ahead.

LieutenantDavies 23:39, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

Hi Actene,

I thinkth we shouldth deleteth Hard Dropth or better yetth move itth to mytth userspaceth.

Whatta ya thinkth?

Regardsth

WOW YOU UNDERSTOOD ME!.

Anyway i will move to my userspace and finish it on my own unless we both have time.

For TOFF you wanna let are S-IIIs work together?

Well Andrews dead :/.

Happened on Christmas Day 2557.

So Joshua is depressed.

As for the S-III Story give me to friday and if it's not done by then move on k?

I take it you've read the prologue and first post? Anyway, the current covenant threat is mostly eliminated, except a number of forces on the ring. They've set up bases (like the ones seen in Halo Wars) and need to defend the bases from attack. There are only 3, and all Covenant ships are gone, so now support is available. Your brute commander can be here if you want him to be, its up to you. However, the other covenant forces which can be seen on the force composition are not yet there, and will arrive shortly after the battle of the bases, but i'll tell you when that is. Got it? :P

Go ahead, post away.

Favour
On the Fan Fiction awards will you vote for my guy Joshua McCallan? and i'll vote for Simon?

Cheers

Want me to help? I enjoy working with you.

Nope medicine intriges me.

As for the Nexus (i really need to finish) i will install a pocily which allows other people to become enlightened. (Wondering if you would want a hai to become a Nexus) cos then i could create a regiment of non-nexus.

As for Ajax. Thats what ya expect from him :/

RE:New Race
So I'm easy to go on, huh? Then what if I say no?

Jk dude =P, I'm actually very intrigued by the idea, I had plans on a neutral race myself (since the Verok wont be neutral anymore), but thanks to you, a lot of work and thinking has been taken off my shoulders xD, thanks. If you want, I could help you with them a bit, interested? In any case, go ahead and make them, and good luck in the annual awards!

LieutenantDavies 22:40, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

All of it sounds good. Is there any particular section/thing that you'd need me for?

LieutenantDavies 22:55, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

Here's a few:


 * 
 * 
 * 
 * 

Hope they're good enough. Happy New Year BTW (in Sweden it's the new year at least, it's probably not in your place, but whatevs).

LieutenantDavies 23:11, 31 December 2008 (UTC)

S-III Story
Sorry I wont be able to post on that for sometime as i am extremly busy with the UISW, Nexus etc.

So go ahead without me.

Sorry

And Happy New Year!

I have an idea why dont we both concentrate on Natulla while i do the Thrid Battle of System Alpha 3?

The Nexus arrive with over 100 ships blast the Hai Blockcade to Hell and Back (Taking some minor causualties) landing reinforcements then moving on to Hai territory.

What ya say?

Sounds Perfect. I'll get on it ASAP. Want me to concentrate on this just like you did for the 2nd battle?

it'll be the 3rd battle of SA3

O Read the religion section on Nexus. The Generals consider themselves desendents of the admiral gods and wouldn't want to usurp them so they wouldn't be glory seeking he would be quite tactical. Though he is 3/4 Machine.

== RE: Beyond Veil's Azure; for everyone. I will add a section for interested participants; still setting stuff up tho :) would be very glad to be able to see simon! congrats on the HFFW Annual Award.  ==

Keep in touch,

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 20:52, 1 January 2009 (UTC)
 * That sounds reasonable. I am particularly interested regarding Artemis; is she open to being featured? There are a number of diverse and wholly separate plotlines so there won't be a problem of "cluttering"  RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 21:16, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Pacifist Name
I'm usually bad at coming up with names too, but this time I actually came up with something pretty quick. How about "Lorians"? Let me know when and if you've made their page so I can check it.

LieutenantDavies 23:39, 1 January 2009 (UTC)

Hey cool species
I saw the Lorians page. I gave it 5 stars,like I always do on your pages. They seem interesting,but I have to admit,they are ugly.

LD put me in charge of making the final human faction in his new project,and I think it should be communist,formed by followers of the old Koslovics from the Interplanetary War.

Red Cross in SPAAAAAACCCCCE !!!!! WEEEEEEEEEEEHHH!!!! My randomness is over...although its continued in my sig. That is true... anywho,have I told you about my adminship on Zombiepedia yet ???

Squad Silver
Hey Wardog has come unexpectedly fast so i highly suggest you finish creating your SPARTANs before the first post gets in Hollywood

Look what I made XD

I placed it here SpecialOps Stealth Plane. I checked it out this morning. good article.

As for Zeno he made the Communist Faction that me and 112 made :/

So im confused.

No because Zeno (no offense to him) is barely here and Davies said only 2 break away factions and Davies hasn't responded to him to say yes or no.

So i'm uber-confused.

BR55HB-AR
No, go ahead.

RE: BVA ; see Midgard
Dear Actene,

Glad to hear from you! Really was thinking about BVA and was looking forward to see esp. Artemis and Simon.

The UNSC as a whole is at pax galactica; galactic peace, no wars, economic prosperity, social justice and health care is good. The combat actions of Task Force 51 and UNSC Special Operations Command are thus largely confined to the Outer Rim and Midgard. Few other counterterrorism operations occur elsewhere in the UNSC; mostly, it's all good with blue skies except for what happens in the RP, although that is set to change as the RP progresses.

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 02:12, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

RE: 2994 / 2995
Dear Actene,

I have no special plans; if you want to let them have civilian roles, I'd be more than interested. ;-) Kimberly has an exception; I have very specific plans for her in the RP. However, there is a need for direct-action SF operators for Task Force 51, which is the principal focus of the RP in the beginning. What're Simon doing? :P

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 02:28, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

Well, 141 is 42 at the time, so we could have a little old-school vs. new school tactics.

Old-School: Typicaly any tactic used during The Great War

New School: Improvised tactics used during assassination/covert ops

Thats kinda what I was getting at, but yeah.

The Beast
Hey, you're going to like this. Specops306 made this humour article a while ago. Bro, it's great, you got to see it!

PS: Press > for TIDDLES

lol, you'll get it soon...

Meat  &   Taters...  03:39, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

Articles?
Did you see the image TIDDLES. ROFL that image was the spine of the story!

Anyway, what happened to your signature? Your articles are gone. (Green's a nice touch though).

Meat  &   Taters...  03:48, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

Green
Uh, yeah, every signature you left is lime-green. I don't know if it's just my computer or something, but they are green.

Meat  &   Taters...  04:00, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

RE:2995/2996 Mission
You didnt get back to me on that. It may be an interesting read,because he has a big crush on her. Maybe if she almost dies or something he could risk his life for her,get his nose broken too lol.

I didnt say she was,but didnt she almost die on her mission with 2994 ?

hmm ok
Are 2994 and 2995 formally engaged or married? I'm ambivalent regarding if they're retired, contractors, or if they're on the front line. However, it would be interesting if Simon and Cassandra serve in Task Force 51. But anything's up to you. If nothing else, Cassandra can be a civilian contractor to the UNSC Office of Naval Intelligence, aboard the UNSC Beyond Veil's Azure on its reconnaissance mission; we could find interesting things to do once that gets rolling. But it's up to you. I'm glad you're thinking some of your SPARTANs are retired; good progressive thinking :)

Well, keep in touch. Let me know where you think it's going.

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 04:23, 3 January 2009 (UTC)
 * I actually have an extremely short story to answer your questions. :P Hold on a few hours. Let me finish up with the embryonic stem (ES) cells, and I'll be back.  RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 14:01, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

BVA
Yep i'll be making an S-1.2. Btw the want Cassandra and Simon to be reunited with the last 3 guys in Team Wolf?

MSN?
Do you have MSN? I'd like to share my next project's secrets with you (as you, Joshie and 112 is unofficially my "inner circle"), and MSN is the best way to do so. If you don't have one, get one, or at least tell me if you have an email :P

LieutenantDavies 15:51, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

Sad face, MSN is a lot more flexible. Ah, whatever, I'll be posting the stuff to you sometime soon.

As for the Lorians, no, don't place a community template, because you created it, not a major part of the community. But you could put a Property Share template, which means that others are free to use them in their fanon, that would be more appropriate.

LieutenantDavies 15:57, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Only hope I can do it Justice :/ I'm an OK writer for battles i prefer charecters but thanks for the support :)

Warmest Regards

Half?! Wow. Thats less than a 1/10 of the Nexus Navy :/

Third Battle of System Alpha 3
There it is Enjoy :P

Halo: Beckon Forth Sunrise; my summary thoughts on 2994/2995/Simon/Cassandra problem and possible solution? please see?
 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 17:18, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

squad leader
ah i didn't notice that >.< well you go ahead if you like as for me i'm going to leave my squad as is but feel free to edit yours to your pleasing. Hollywood

RE: BFS
Hey, good to hear from you, thanks for your encouraging words. Do you approve of it in terms of your characters? I know they're you're characters so I don't want to write story for them that you don't think is fitting.

I plan on writing a second installment set during their time as trainers; I believe that given the situation, it is likely that Simon will sign onboard - solely for Cassandra; he's concerned for her, and has had nowhere to go to except to her. When the fighting starts, I believe it is likely that the SPARTANs will request transfer to Task Force 51; Artemis because she wants to jump into the fray, the others because they've mentored a hundred child soldiers for a decade and won't let them go. What're your extrapolations on their trajectories?

Please let me know if it is canon-ish. =P

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 02:03, 4 January 2009 (UTC)
 * Sounds good. :) Please let me know if you have anything you want me to change in BFS; seriously - I would not want anything to be incorporated into your characters' canons that you wouldn't want. Yea, sure, feel free to add them to the BVA page. Can I tag 2994, 2995, Cassandra, and Simon with the tag to indicate their entrance into the RP? :P I also have a second installation in mind that elucidates them after they begin the training ... do you have an IM client or a gmail?  RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 02:42, 4 January 2009 (UTC)

boo wassup
Alright, sounds good! :) I'm honored then to have been able to chronicle a little bit of our latest SPARTAN of the Year then =P

My primary interest (aside from developing the pre-RP plot) rests in the emotional development of the characters; which is the only thing I'm interested in, how people evolve, and to explore the polar ranges of depression. I was thinking of a second short follow-up installation to Beckon Forth Sunrise that is more personally involved in explaining how 2994 has changed, perhaps some major interaction with Artemis, getting things straight between Cassandra and Simon ... hahahaha sorry lately I've fallen in love with your characters and have been thinking about how I would lead them if I were in your shoes =P perhaps it's too impetuous and too pre-mature; I'd be glad to explain my ideas to you but wouldn't want to steal your thunder...

...thanks again for the green light on BFS :) I appreciate it

Warm regards,

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 04:04, 4 January 2009 (UTC)

RE: Chapter 5
I'd still go with original idea of 2994 seeing 141 walking towards the terminal, and follows him, they have their first little scuffle, then...whatever.

Yeah, I can do that.

RE: Halo:Beckon Forth Sunrise
Dear Actene,

Glad to hear from you. :)

So in terms of extended character development, I would be highly interested in both Artemis and Cassandra; Artemis strikes me as the more impassionate killer, highly efficient, few emotional attachments, superfluous excellence demanding an efficient, detached personality. I would be highly interested in having Kimberly Ivy Blackburn and Artemis having a detailed conversation (about mid-way through the Myrmidon training) because both of them feel, at least to me, as highly similar; always at the top of whatever they did, always lonely, always the best, always alone. It would be interesting for me to see Artemis turn around in her circles, as did Kim, and by the end of the Myrmidon training and the beginning of the Midgard Campaign, that Artemis and 2994 would have some sort of emotional attachment; I find it inevitable in the dual development of both of their characters, and it would be especially surprising and novel if Artemis initiated it. I would be highly interested in writing a second short story that deals with this.

(On that note, it would be indefinably preferable if we could give "2994" a name ... referring to him as "2994" over and over again was extremely awkward, so I mostly never referred to him by name in BFS, instead tagging him with the pronoun as "him". It would be interesting if he could acquire the misnomer of "Apollo", the sibling of Artemis. Apollo strikes me as a fitting name for a special warfare operator as well)

It would be interesting also if we could get Simon together with [|one of the female SPARTANs of Vulcan team (there's 3 of them)]. I am interested in Cassandra primarily. I was thinking that Simon, Cassandra, and XXX (unknown SPARTAN-III) oversee an extended training mission of one of the Myrmidon teams (I have the training all laid out), and the three of them take some perverse pleasure in deliberately fouling up their mission, turning a half-hour deployment into a two-day running battle that leaves the Myrmidons exhausted. Afterwards, XXX would invite the other two over for dinner, and afterwards, Cassandra will leave during dessert, leaving Simon and XXX alone for a night. Afterwards, Cassandra will become suspicious that Simon was having a fun time with XXX, and unexpectedly, she becomes jealous and hurt, which leads Simon to explode with how pathetic Cassandra has always been and how Simon always had to take care of her. It would be interesting in this way to develop a probe for whatever hidden, long-suppressed emotions Simon and Cass had for each other, and how this incident provokes Cass and makes her even more hurt, lonely, and depressed.

Keep in touch,

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 08:25, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

thanks for your extended response; good thoughts, keep in touch
Dear Actene,

Your ideas regarding Simon and Cassandra also seem like rational progressions in their characters; I'll leave them up to your jurisdiction ;-)

Sure, I'll try to play with Artemis and Apollo. May I mark your SPARTAN-IIIs as integrated into the Myrmidon training structure and note our new (tentative) name for 2994? Hahaha I'll slip you a copy of the draft of the follow-up installment when I'm done with it =]

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 18:52, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Are you going to continue the 1st section on Chapter 5 of H:U?

Well, I figured you were going to detail 2994 seeing 141 and do his whole wtf is a SPARTAN doing here and why wasn't i told etc. etc.

As It Were...
Now, I believe, is the time for our characters to find out a little of who each other is. Concur?

I'd hoped that i would catch you before you posted, but it doesn't matter. I do like the way 2994 has a thirst for 141's blood now. It should make the next fight really hectic. I concur with them contacting their superiors, and i have an idea for 2994(if you don't mind, but I thought it might stir up some things between ONI and 2994.)

2994 contacts the Director of ONI, Cole Whitman, and demands to know why he wans't informed that there was a SPARTAN on Rager XII while he(2994) was there too. ONI responds that the mission the SPARTAN is on is different that what 2994 thinks it is, but assures him that the sending of the SPARTAN was MARSOC(MARine Special Operations Command)'s decision and it was last-minute as well. 2994 then asks what else the Director is witholding from him, possibly threatening him. The Director tells him to back off, and that he must complete his mission ASAP.

If you use this idea, then my next post would be the Director and the Deputy Director contacting MARSOC and they argue and discuss and etc. Then MARSOC would contact 141 and provide him with information their Intelligence Specialists(specifically headed by Hijotio Jacobs, the man who effectively started Project: MIST that created SPARTAN-141) found on 2994. Then, we return to Rager XII and progress from there.

Yeah, I don't think it'll take more than a couple more Chapter to finish the story. It's gonna be sad when we do, cause then I won't really have anything to work on afterwards.

David does look interesting as a character. We can discuss this further after Ultimatum is finished, but I have an idea for a basic plot that may help clear up an empty spot in one of my own articles...

Finished, plus some minor changes to the character list. tell me what you think.

RE: Rank
Dear Actene,

Haha yea. I was trying to think of the same thing as I wrote our pre-RP follow up to BFS. The UNSC ranks pretty much confuse me a ton too so I made up User:RelentlessRecusant/UNSC Ranks as a page to hopefully sort things out in my own head haha :) Since Artemis is after all an extremely accomplished fighter, I was thinking of installing her as a Navy Commander (O-5) and having her as a strike commander; actually, I was going to try to install her as the field commander of our first gig together hahahahahaha ... which reminds me that I'd be interested if I could write a 'lil bit of her since I'm infatuated with her and 2994's concept =P

But uhh yea. I'm still trying to sort out the ranks. I'm loathe to "assign ranks" to anyone's character because then that sets up a military chain of command in the RP that I'd rather not have. But yea. Not quite sure.

 RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 16:53, 10 January 2009 (UTC)
 * hahahaha yea sounds good ... umm ... no clue on armor and tech ... likely that in 40 years that they'll change (weapons changed between H1 and H2 and they were days / weeks apart, same for H3) ... not sure how it's all going to work up; I've coordinated two RPs before but am trying to make this unique, no clue how this is going to work, but your idea for Simon sounds excellent (make a myr character!) ... Cassandra sounds good too. Artemis and our 2994/Apollo we can figure out ;-) So yea if we can both do parts of Artemis, I will try to install her as the lead for the operation, not sure I'm mad confused haha  RelentlessRecusant  (Bureaucrat) (Talk) (Contribs) 17:20, 10 January 2009 (UTC)

I'll follow up with MARSOC talking with 141 soon. Dude, you should consider archiving this version of your talk page. It's long as fuck!

Archiving
Just create a new page titled "User talk:Actene/Archive 1". Copy all of the content here and paste it in the new page. Save, then create a template, something simple, like.

It could look like this:

Or anything you want it to look like. If you aren't well versed in HTML, then tell me what you want it to look like and i'll do my best. Then, link your talk archive page to where it says "Archive 1" and put the template on the top of your new, empty talk page.

If you need any help, ask me!