User blog comment:RuralStikler/Noob Halo fanfic writer./@comment-1907227-20100306073530

See this is the very reason why I've let the spoilers drop now. This Ajax jerkoff down here reakons my story doesent make sense and he (or she or whatever) hasnt even read it yet..none of you have. If you think this is bad for a cross-over just wait till you see the sequels. I'm not trying to make enemies here, and I guess I can slightly alter the story to be canon. This story is set in the Halo Universe, using the Halo tech. I've just borrowed some other characters to make up the cast. Which I find easier to do then creating my own. For those who are not bagging my story before reading, I will gladly post what I have written which is the first 5 chapters, some helpful advice would be great too.