Talk:HG68-AA Falcon

This is an overall good article. I like its backstory as a precursor to the Pelican and your interesting innovations for its weapons. There are only a few grammar problems and no spelling errors from what I can see, which is a very good thing. I do think you should re-write the "Resemblance' portion of the article and title it "Trivia" instead. All in all, this is a nice, standard article.