Talk:The Great Offensive

Wee thing, when finishing someone's speech, if you use anything other than a comma i.e, period of exclamation point, you don't need to do a comma after it. Alternatively you could just have a comma instead, like in "Indeed. Alright, look at this.", would just become "Indeed. Alright, look at this,". Also if you do end it with a full stop of exclamation point, if it's in quotation marks the next word does not need to be capitalised. Other than that, very good!  Joshua  (Talk)  (Contribs) 01:56, April 14, 2014 (UTC)