User talk:Biologystudent/Hunters Rising

Hey, not to sound rude, but your page doesn’t have all that great grammar. You also seem to have a little trouble subtitling photos. But I like the story, and if you like, I can fix the page for you so that it doesn’t get marked with a template. Sound good?Tuckerscreator 01:28, March 7, 2010 (UTC)