User talk:Xbox360loligan/Va'ghh

Grammar isn't great to start off with and...

Non Canon Friendly fo the following reasons: Twice as hot, twice as long, twice as short, what?
 * Va'ghh could not have been in all the battle of Harvest (Yes, there were Three), simply becuase (You never said this, though I think it was implied) only the Third Battle of Harvest had Elites involve; the 2nd was actually a space battle, and First only had Brutes and Grunts.
 * The only battle the Elites were even involved in was the UNSC was the third, and then the Elites were on the defensive.
 * "He used his trusty Plasma Rifle, which was modified to overheat in double of when it normally did."