User talk:Overlord Raxus/Raheili Empire

NCF for:
 * 250,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 ships? Godmodded, tone it down to less then a hundred thousand (100,000).


 * "factories assemble nanites that form ships and building process takes about 5 minutes per ship, plus the excess nanites used for repairing breaches in the hull" - more NCF. 5 minutes per ship, eh? Great quality control then.


 * "The average ship in the Raheili Navy is said to be twice the size of the Forerunner Dreadnaught and four times as powerful, even including the Raheili "Warp" Class Frigate being as big as the Forerunner Dreadnaught, with the largest ship being the Overlord Class Super-Flagship (80 Forerunner Dreadnaughts)." - godmodded still.


 * "The Raheili are bipedal organisms with three jointed, reverse jointed legs and tall posture, much like Sangheili, but made entirely out of Tritanium, and some organic systems, like the cybernetic nervous system, cybernetically assisted digestive system, the cybernetically assisted respiratory system, and the synthetic muscular system" - Um...living Titanium life forms? NCF.


 * The entire immune section is NCF. pERIOD.

Moderation is good; not extremes. This article needs serious work.