User blog:Anonymous ONI agent/Yeah...

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Here's their mistakes:
 * Storytelling. A key element was missing from the plot: Sense.
 * Sequencing of events. It's pretty hard to perform surgery when the patient is wearing Mark VI armor. And if you already wasted your time with dismantling and reassembling it, why unnecessarilly waste more time by taking the armor off afterwards?
 * Maybe Master Chief got plastic surgery too, because he looks way too young.