Talk:The Grey Rebellion

It's really cool to see pre-war history of the Covenant. And a rebellion no less! I really like where this is going, though I have a few personal nit-picks.

1. I don't think grammar wise the title needs "The" in front of "Grey Rebellion".

2. Perhaps keeping things like history first in order, then things like species and characters can be towards the bottom? To keep the page clean. It feels like the story is cut in half like that. Maybe they are kept as a list in bulletpoints with links to the pages you have for them, to make it look more professional

3. The other thing is that the fleets feel like they lack diversity, in which I mean they have two kinds of ships with the exception of the CSO-class. In my opinion a fleet out on the fringes, or any military fleet for that matter, would be more diverse to be flexible.

Well that's all I see right now and this is just my opinion. But I like this and I look forward to seeing it finished!

Regards ---DirgeOfCerberus111 (talk) 05:49, January 13, 2014 (UTC)