User talk:Darkest Reaper/Dylan Tanner

Err, unrealistic for several reasons.

1. Captain Major is not a military rank. A Captain is a Commissioned Officer given command of a Company-Level Unit, whereas a Major is a Commissioned Officer given command of a Battalion-level unit. I suggest changing it to either, or to Lieutenant, if you wish for your character to actively participate in combat.

2. The UNSCDF is a formal military; it follows conventional military organization and structuring. Thusly, you may wish to change your "Squad" to fit with military formations. Wikipedia is a useful resource, given the UNSC Marine Corps follows USMC organization.

3. Mendicant Bias was not canonically introduced to Humans (to MCPO SPARTAN-117, more accurately) until the Battle of the Ark, and even then, he was destroyed when the Ark was destroyed. He could not accompany your group.

4. Unless he chose a Vocational Specialty of Jet Aircraft Pilot, he wouldn't pilot a longsword. In any modern military, being a Pilot is a career choice; you cannot be both an Aircraft Pilot and and Infantryman. If you want him to be a pilot, then don't list him as utilizing any weaponry other than a Sub Machine Gun or a Sidearm, as personal defence weapons. If you want him to serve as an Infantry Officer, however, you should remove the Longsword bit.