User talk:Cole80/Dick Simmons

Wow, epic Star Trek plagiarism regarding his enlistment. A few other things here are a bit off: Make changes, please. Cheers!--The All-knowing Sith&#39;ari 17:58, April 4, 2010 (UTC)
 * He's getting into bar fights, but if he's not drinking, why is he in the bar?
 * More to the point, how does a seventeen year old get into a bar?
 * I'd imagine that you'd need very good grades to get into the Navy OCS, and you don't get good grades by flunking out of school. Why does the Navy even want him?
 * More to the point, how does he get into the UNSC Navy if he has a criminal record?
 * Even if he does get into the Navy, why is he, a known violent criminal, allowed to prowl around the corridors with an assault rifle?
 * What's a crazed Marine doing on the Spirit of Fire? If he's battle fatigued or has PTSD, that should have been noticed by a Corpsman and he should have been brought out of combat; the symptoms don't just manifest out of nowhere.
 * If family members are allowed on the Spirit of Fire (which they're not), where are Cutter's wife and daughter?
 * Why did he go and rescue Cutter alone when the Spirit of Fire has several battalions worth of Marines that are trained to do exactly that? Why wasn't he killed by the overwhelming numbers of Covenant?
 * Captains don't get to name their ships.
 * And finally, why wasn't he lost when the Spirit of Fire disappeared? You know, like in Halo Wars?