User talk:Morhek/Archive 2

Call For Assistance
hello, I am writing a halo fanfic/fanon (I'm still deciding which it is) and I am asking experienced writers for their assistance. My particular struggle is my character's appearance. Oh, and I took that Mary Sue test honestly and somehow got 117 O_o anyway, if you would like to help me, msg me back. I would love to hear from you.

it's me again, bout the appearance?
NinjaCat4"Were it so easy..." 00:21, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

I looked at your guide actually xD I just prefer to talk to people one on one. And Nekama, she's human. But she isn't some marine or Spartan. She wants to join the Covenant! (and this is after the Human-Covenant war...and there will probably be a brief moment where it begins again (cuz there is a secret Cruiser in the Galaxy that holds a HUGE fleet of Covenant. The religion is the same, but I added world domination (hopefully not to corny the way I'm going to write it) in there. I am trying to think of something an Elite would wear but that Nekama wold wear even though she is human. I might have to give you more bakground bout my fanfiction/fanon, huh? xD ask and I shall go on a somehwhat of a ramble. I need all the help i can get. I really don't know what ethnicity she is and hairstyle, which is why I am desperate for help T_T she is never going to be an rpg character btw lol. I used the test you had on your guide =3

I answered them all honestly...as best as i could understand. Nekama doesn't seem like an over the top character to me either. but my rpg character (not related to halo) is i know that for sure lol Nekama isn't all powerful...huh...now I'm confused xD

ARG!!!!!
NinjaCat4"Were it so easy..." 01:13, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

I got a 32 on that same test after redoing it...WHAT AMI DOING WRONG??!!! T_T I feel like there is no creativity to creating a character anymore...no matter how improbable. Ugh...my other character is more of a Mary Sue than Nekama.

Oh man, I suck

=P
heh, i figured you wanted to see me before you answered oh well.

The Cruiser (named Sent To Infinity btw) is run by the Prophet of Pardon. This fleet is likw what it was before MC killed Regret. Pardon still believes in the Great Journey, only (I know I said world domination, but in my mind i thought galactic xD) but he plans to rule over the entire universe and even frighten the Flood of his power and eventually kill them off. Nekama wants to join the Hidden Covenant Fleet because she never really felt human. She belives in the Great Journey. And after killing her father, she felt not humanity left in her. Pardon instead of killing her off as if she was an insect, he decides to use her as a slave - lower than the Unggoy. Hmm, well, I thought since she adored the Elites so much (after quietly studying them since she's never seen one up close) that she could pattern her everyday attire after them. But should she wear a robe or something else Native like?

here's my childish version of my first chapter:

http://ninjacat4.deviantart.com/#/d2z7ung

I made the Hidden Fleet ruled by a Prophet sine I know they have their own species (which i didn't know before =O)

I want to add alot of things the canon didn't have. Nekama will possess a device that stops time. It's hard to describe in my head but basically. it's a little larger than a human's hand but also has a button to push in order to stop time. Idk what to call it...

Since she knows the Sangheili language, she writes "THE GREAT JOURNEY" on the wall of te cell she's put into when she is captured. Yeah, she uses a teleportation machine in a ship her father had and was studying. She killed her father (you'll find out if you read the chapter) and now the facility was abandoned yet nothing was taken from it. An AI knows her "true duty" and helps her activate the machine and she is teleported just above a battleship whih happens to be flying into the hanger of the Infinity. (it's equal to High Charity in that its a holy city). (Remember when Cortana teleports with MC when they go back to Truth and Reconciliation the second time on CE and he falls cuz of her slight micalculation? It's kinda like that. And when a Prison Guard goes to feed the prisoners, he finds that message of the Journey written in Sangheili. He is astonished by it and tells the Prophet and she becomes the Arbitress (since the arbiter is somehwere else). Nekama also falls in love with an Elite (remember, she thinks of herself as not human, so it's okay in my opinion). Pardon wants revenge on the human race for killing his brothers (Halo 2-3 ref).And he's a little more frazy than his brothers; since he wants galactical domination. Nekama means revenge in Hebrew =P now you're somewhat up to date with my story xD I'm working on my second chapter now.

Any feedback?

NinaCat4"Were it so easy..." 01:39, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thx! I make sure and keep trying 8D she still is forming anyways...

np! take your time!
It was something my friend thought up and I thought it would be ool to use. But okay, i like the Arbiter better anyway xD I just thought it sounded too male for her...

Because she's studied the Covenant secretly, she trained herself in the arts of combat. plus, her father resigned from the military after the Human-Covenant war ended.

yeah, good point. They could make her one if she wanted. But i meant like, what she could wear before she goes to the Holy City

I for some reason love the Human-elite relationship! It might be because I once had a dream about kissing one LOL

I never actually thought about what Halo had as far as warping time...ARG! does the Crystal actually look like anything?! (God i am so inexperienced) All I'm getting is the Forerunner Dreadnought and Halo 2. I'm so confused T_T

wait, you did get my other links right? oh, and she has an abnormal strength more advanced than a human; equal to a spartan, though she isn't one.

NinjaCat4"Were it so easy..." 04:31, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

Guess what? I wrote a second chapter!!! 8D http://ninjacat4.deviantart.com/art/Halo-Renaissance-Prt-2-182146810?q=gallery%3ANinjaCat4%2F6519165&qo=0

ARG!!!

NinjaCat4"Were it so easy..." 09:28, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

forgive, this habit will not adapt within me just yet

http://ninjacat4.deviantart.com/art/Halo-Renaissance-Prt-2-182146810?q=gallery%3ANinjaCat4%2F6519165&qo=0

NinjaCat4"Were it so easy..." 17:36, October 10, 2010 (UTC)

http://ninjacat4.deviantart.com/art/Halo-Renaissance-Prt-2-182146810 my second chapter 8D Part A!!!!

Intro plz?
Knowing that your writing style is one of the best in HF, would you mind write a introduction for Project:Human History? Would appreciate it if you could. :) -  5 əb'7 aŋk (7alk ) 12:10, October 14, 2010 (UTC)

Interplanetary Union?
The Halo Encyclopedia describes Sergeant Johnson as fighting in the "Interplanetary Civil War". If this means the same thing as the Insurrection, could it give us a clue as to what the confederacy of Earth and its colonies is actually called? Perhaps the "Interplanetary Union", "Interplanetary Confederacy", or some such thing?--The All-knowing Sith&#39;ari 21:38, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
 * Kinda reminds me of the endlessly competing power structures of the Third Reich; no one was ever sure who was in charge of what... Oops!. Should we make a change to our articles?--The All-knowing Sith&#39;ari 11:40, October 19, 2010 (UTC)

Subbles
Kat is actually Subtanks name. Promlemz sulvd. Lord curse this laptop. Yonde itadaki arigatōgozaimasu, The Halfblood Prepare,   for   the   Enveloping   Darkness  10:03, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

Losing Hope!
Losing hope has begun! --  Chris  talk   blog  23:47, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Problem of invisibility
You might want to add the above to the Fanon Guide. :P -  5 əb'7 aŋk (7alk ) 10:36, December 2, 2010 (UTC)

You seem like the academic type...
I was wondering if you'd read any Albert Camus, or Franz Kafka? They just seem like your kind of authors. :P Joshua (Talk)  (Contribs) 17:13, December 9, 2010 (UTC)

Halo fanon for dummies floater
Hi. I just saw the "Halo fanon for dummies" floater you have set up. It's a cool idea. I wondered, though, if you realize that on smaller (and even medium-sized) screens it is not floating in the "blank" background space around the content, but is actually covering up parts of the main-page? As it cannot be clicked away, this is sort of irritating. Use zoom in on your browser (or reset your screen res) and take a look to see what I mean. Many of your readers will not have a large screen. Maybe you could integrate it into the main page (not as a floater) -- perhaps in your table of image-links where there's a spot on the bottom row?? Or possibly find a way to fix it into the side areas so it doesn't float on top of the content on smaller screens? Just some thoughts on solutions that might work on all screen sizes. I do like the image though -- it's very iconic. -- Wendy (talk ) 03:01, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Operation: VORAUSSICHT
I was wondering if it wasn't too late for offer any of my SPARTAN-IIIs for it? :D Joshua (Talk)  (Contribs) 19:24, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Merge
Hey SpecOps.

Can I merge your Glaurung into my canon? It would be much appreciated. //<span style="background-color:White; color:MidnightBlue; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> SPARTAN-A110   06:16, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thank SpecOps.

Much appreciated! //<span style="background-color:White; color:MidnightBlue; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> SPARTAN-A110   07:48, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

And speaking on altering, your Glaurung is on-board the UNSC Apocalypso while in my universe, he is assigned to my main SPARTAN character. Do you mind if Glaurung is in two universes? //<span style="background-color:White; color:MidnightBlue; -moz-border-radius-topleft:10px; -moz-border-radius-bottomleft:10px"> SPARTAN-A110   15:18, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE:VORAUSSICHT
Well, I have SPARTAN-G024(ODST Joshie), who is a Headhunter and head of team of Headhunters called VIOLET-III, I've not got round to fleshing out the group or the other 3 SPARTANs in it...Due to me focusing my energies on the leader. VIOLET-III is essentially a highly specialised Headhunter team - Similar to Noble Team in their make up but not...If you get me? I know what I mean in my head, but it's hard to put into words. Is that OK? And could the team investigate it? :P <font color="#7F007F">Joshua <font color="#7F007F">(Talk) <font color="#7F007F"> (Contribs) 19:20, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Crossover
Just wondering, maybe you could include some Project: INDIGO or Operation: VORAUSSICHT into Losing Hope, or at least mention it somewhere... if you'd like. I read the article fully for the first time and I really like it. ;) --  Chris  talk   blog  23:38, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, I almost forgot... even so, I meant go into it a little deeper but now I understand your reasoning. Sorry to sound like an idiot, :) --  Chris  talk   blog  16:09, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Having a Honch
I've been working my central Unggoy character Honcha lately, and Actene just helped out with some advice. He recommends I change the name though, and I would like to get some feedback on him from others, so do you think you could review him too for me? Tuckerscreator (<font color="#008000">stalk ) 23:12, January 29, 2011 (UTC)