User talk:Spartan232/ODST PFC allison

Hi there, this page is considered to be in violation of the Halo Fan Fiction Wiki's Canon Policy (as outlined in this link). The issues with the page are as follows, along with potential solutions to the problems:
 * 1) How and why did she join the UNSC armed forces, if she was poor with firearms? She would have failed basic training for failing marksmanship, and would certainly not make it into the ODSTs. Tomahawks are not effective distance weapons either - and dubiouslt effective against shieleded targets.
 * 2) How was she a soldier if she never killed anything, and hunted as a kid? Or is it that she killed things, just never a human, wolf, fox, cat, or dog?
 * 3) There are many occupations you can get by in making more than a living wage without attendance of a University or College or similar tertiary educational institution.
 * 4) Why would she have no friends, because of failing grades? She would have needed emotional support - and more than that, such an action as failing your classes will result in her being drawn to perhaps a not particularly nice lot of peers.

My overall solution is a complete rewrite of the page, removing essentially all that is already on the page.

With regards,

Leo Fox (talk) 01:25, May 30, 2013 (UTC)