Talk:Supreme Commander Thora 'Marumee

Welcome!
Hey there bud, and welcome to Halo Fanon! I'm S-D379, one of the Site Patrollers on this wiki. Just here to give advice on the new Sangheili article you have here, which is done to all new users. Here it goes:-
 * First of all, remember your Writer Template. To add it, simply paste  on the top of your page, such that it creates a box indicating everyone that it is your article. I've already added it for you this time, but please do remember next time.
 * As per our page naming rules, we don't include the character's rank in the page name. So on that matter, please rename the page to just "Thora 'Marumee", or since he abandons the Covenant during the Covenant Separatists split, just "Thora 'Marum".
 * The image you're using is not inside the infobox template. You have to copy the file link and paste it in the  parameter in the infobox such that the picture does not appear outside. If it's confusing, or you're not sure what to do, I can do it for you.
 * Regarding formatting, you seem to have all the information directly on the page without any headings. I'd recommend you split the text such that there is an introduction, a "History/Biography/Career" section for the story, with sub-headings for each separate battle/event Thora participates in. You can view various Sangheili articles as examples here.

These are just the initial qualms I had with your article. If you have any questions, you can always contact me on my talk page here, or any member of the site's Administration Team. With that being said, I hope you enjoy your time on our wiki!

Happy fanfiction writing! 14:44, March 3, 2018 (UTC)