User blog:A Fellow Stalker/My first piece of writing in Halo

This was originally a character page I wrote for a Halo RPG I used to participate in. It's the first piece of writing I ever really committed to, is probably to thank for me ever getting into Halo Fanon many years down the line.

I was eleven when I first wrote this, I don't regret it, because I learned how to write by taking criticism ("you fucking suck you bitch") from the post.

Have a good laugh.

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Name: Jakob Zaborowski Species: white human Branch: O.D.S.T. (ORBITAL DROP SHOCK TROOPER) Rank: 1st Lieutenant

Height: 6'3" Weight: 190

Skills (M): -Piloting (pelicans, hornets, longswords) -Sniper Rifles -Explosives Skills (C): -very agile and can run very fast -persausev and is really good at talking to people -inspiring

NPC's: Private Benjamin Stevenson - stevenson is a very good private. he is very cowardly but sometimes is brave and will fite to the end. he was born in england.

Corporal John Dillet - John knows how to shoot his guns so he is the sniper of the team. John is from coral and is very nice to Jakob.

Sergeant Steve Anderson - Anderson has white hair and has been an O.D.S.T. for a very long time. hes super brave but doesnt like Jakob that much because he thinks he shuld be the lieutenant

Biography: Jakobs parents were drifters from a place no one realy knows and were kiled when jakob was a kid and jakob hated the rebels for ity because they were killed by rebels in a bombing so he joined the O.D.S.T.S. jakob was a very good leutenant and managed to kill a lot of the covenant elites so they let him become a lieutenant after he gained tons of rank. Jakob was also very good at flying things like pelicans and they said he was even better than some pilots. Jakob is very sad when his men died and when his good friend Sergeant Mickenser died he promised to never let one of his men die again.

RP Sample: Jakob dropped from orbit with the other O.D.S.T.s and he was dropping with some other marines. private jenny got on the radio and started screaming "i cant get my chute open! my parachute isnt opening! im burning up!" "activate your emergency shoot!" jakob said but it was too late and the pod went dark. Jakob was very sad that the marine was dead but decided to keep dropping anyway because he needed to be there for his men. arcadia was below them and had to be saved from the covenant. while Jakob was dropping next to a skyscraper the skyscraper started collapsing in front of jakobs pod and he fell with it. Jakob closed his eyes as he got ready to drop because he knew it was going to hurt. Everything shook when he hit the ground and his vision went back when the skyscraper fell on top of him.

Jakob woke up an hour later when someone moved the rubble from his pod. Jakob saw a police officer with some marines looking down at him and they began trying to remove the door from the pod in order to help jakob out. "Lieutenant Zaborowski we need your help" the officer said

and jakob was ready to fight

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It would be four months later when the profile was approved. It was four pages of people telling me I suck at that point.