User talk:J!MMY8806/Dreadnought Class Omega Battle Ship

There are a few problems with this Ship.


 * First, UNSC ships of any class do not have any shield projectors. If it were to be after the Human-Covenant War, I can believe it to have such technology if you supply the information.
 * Second, as I said before, UNSC ships would go on an average of 2.1 light-year/day rather than the 4.8. Even the fastest Covenant Ship would be able to go as fast as 2.4 l-y/day.
 * Also, all those armaments would not be able to allow enough space for that massive complements. It is only 1.4 Km long with super-heavy armaments with super huge complements? How is that even possible?
 * Not considered a problem but wouldn't a Dreadnought or Battleship be over 1.5 Km? Maybe around 2-3 Km? I'm not so sure about this length but it seemed quite small...

Cheers on fixing those problems. One final note: Proof Read your Articles. I noticed that you have spelling errors and missing punctuation. This would make other users easier to read your articles. Tchao! 18:09, 28 April 2008 (UTC)