Talk:UNSC Embers (CFG-09)

Please remove everything of mine that you've plagiarised for this article, including most of the armour, complement (in which you actually link to two of my articles), crew and everything else that I've missed or suspect but can't prove, because I will find it all eventually.

Several other issues:


 * the text makes frequent reference to a frigate when this article is supposed to be a destroyer


 * If this is an article about an individual ship, most of the article should talk about the ship itself, not the class, which is what a class article is for


 * The hull symbol 'CFG' would indicate some kind of cruiser, not a destroyer, and doesn't exist anyway


 * twenty Shiva missiles is far too many for any 500 metre long vessel to carry


 * twenty Longswords unrealistic in the extreme, given the size of Longswords and the fact that destroyers don't usually carry single ships anyway. The frigate, which was actually designed to carry fighters and was slightly bigger than this vessel, couldn't manage a single Longsword.


 * you've given a destroyer a MAC that fires a round 45% bigger than the HMAC found in cruisers, does that not seem a bit odd to you?


 * most of the other technology you've detailed here is just impossible during the last years of the Human-Covenant war. I suggest you research what tech was available and remove the faint whiff of godmodding this article has.