User talk:Darkshadow092/Flued Jackson

Sorry, but there are three distinct problems with this article:
 * The Interplanetary War was a conflict that occurred during the 2160's, three hundred years before he was born. If I were you, I'd change that part to the Insurrection, a conflict that would be more appropriate.
 * On this site, it is improper and not permitted to include rank in the name of the article. The proper name should be Fleud or Fleud Jackson. If you need help changing this, just ask here.
 * Proper grammar is highly recommended on the Halo Fan Fiction Wikia. That template was put there to encourage you to improve your grammar and spelling. Don't forget to capitalize the names of places, like the sol system (Sol System) or lewis and clarke (Lewis and Clarke).
 * Good luck, SPARTAN  Icon2.png Talk 16:22, April 25, 2010 (UTC)