User talk:Spartan-035/SPARTANS

"No not drugs, the Moa, you need to have a permit for capturing the Moa," said Jorge.

I thought your article was golden up until this point. Really funny stuff hehe; well written. After this line though... I'm not sure about the ease at which people are murdered. Or the inconsequential kind of nature of it. Hmm. Just my thoughts anyway. Very clever concept though. Can't wait to see where this goes. Perhaps even a machinima eventually?? All the best. - TheLostJedi  07:12, December 1, 2011 (UTC)