User talk:Sharparachnid/Sharp arachnid

I don't get you that much, even though I have a little problems about grammars too, what do you mean " small colorful horses "? and definitely not ponies? Colorful horses? Where did you even get that? Which colony would they even find those? The article is fine for me, but the Covenant would never keep anything as pets. Even what kind of creatures they would encounter and capture it for their purposes: Killing people? Well, maybe the grammar is the common problem here but what's the problem here ( mainly, ) is that you should change the details of the " Sharp arachnid " and not when you take interest off on My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic just for that ill matter. It would be better if they were loose creatures and wild on some colonies. Like Reach, the Gúta. They were just terrestrial lifeforms on Reach and presumed to be hostile on both sides. Maybe if you make your creatures like the doings of the Gúta but entirely different ( and not loosely off from a creature on any shows that aren't Halo-ish related ). People would take interest on your article. Just make sure you also read the rules before you try to upload it. Also, if you are still not done with your work here, don't forget to put this:. Remove it when you are sure to finalize your work and feature it.

Chao. That's all is to there now. — 03:52, December 5, 2013 (UTC).

I was pretty sure that was a not-so-subtle jab at me regarding my criticisms of his Clone Trooper spartan article. Its also prudent to note that it is not physically possible for a lifeform to ingest what are essentially razor sharp shards of glass and process them to strengthen their hair. I also think that, given their murderous tendancies, they are not suited as pets. The Covenant wouldn't let such a thing aboard their ships because of the possible loss of crew. For these reasons and the reasons Angelica Frost listed above, this page is tagged as unrealistic. Also, thats a great OC, Angelica!  http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/halofanon/images/c/ce/Scootaloo_Sig.png Scootaloo (Talk)  •  (Contribs)  05:52, December 5, 2013 (UTC)

Can you help me fix it please. And its not a silly name, its named after me. Also i thought you would like the horse joke. Sharparachnid (talk) 22:33, December 5, 2013 (UTC)


 * whoops deleted the page. Wrong button. But yes, just address the issues mentioned above. Thats pretty ample help to be honest. And the joke was appreciated, but you don't joke on articles.  http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/halofanon/images/c/ce/Scootaloo_Sig.png Scootaloo (Talk)  •  (Contribs)  23:51, December 5, 2013 (UTC)