User talk:SokkaZukoAang/SPARTAN-A406

Hi there, I'm going to take this time to quickly welcome you to Halo Fanon, and I hope to see plenty of quality articles in the future. Now on to the important part, there are some problems with the articles, and I'll list them below.

1. SPARTAN-II tags don't have letters assigned to them, only SPARTAN-IIIs have letters to show which company they're from.

2. This one can easily be fixed by stating if he's a Class-I or Class-II Spartan. Class-I tags end at 150, while Class-IIs can, in theory, go up to 500. I'd simply advise to specify that he's a Class-II.

3. Spartans can't really choose what armor they can have, they're mostly assigned armor based on their speciality, although, after the war, if he was assigned to the Spartan branch, he could possibly requisition armor onboard the Infinity, but other wise he'd be assigned armor based on what he's good at, which in this case is marksmanship, which would probably mean he would get Scout armor instead of EVA, but Recon can work.

4. While some Sniper Rifles in real life can be modified to fire fully automatic, the rounds fired by the Sniper in Halo are extremely large, and produce a ton of recoil, firing it fully automatic, or even in a three round burts would probably hurt like hell, not to mention throw off your aim, and waste at least two rounds. So I'd say just keep it a normal Sniper Rifle.

5. This is the smallest one. You should put the Under Construction template underneath the Writers template, not the bottom of the article.

So far this article shows promise, and if you make these corrections, I can see it becoming a decent article in the future. Good luck, and have a nice day.--I am aim to please, and I don&#39;t miss, if I do you won&#39;t live long enough to notice (talk) 21:20, February 17, 2013 (UTC)